Button Mash who is really having a hard time on asking Sweetie Belle to be his Valentine, goes out and ask his friends for advice. But is it worth the risk? Will he successed? Only one way to find out!
EDIT: This was one of my fanfic stories I wrote back in 2013 when it mysteriously disappeared along with my account. So go easy on it!
Devianart made by- ThemunksandTheetts
Pretty good it's just that every time a different character starts to talk you need to make it a new paragraph otherwise good job.
6949403 Yeah thanks for pointing that out
6949406 No problem i'm always happy to help.
Some punctuation errors, but cute! Have a mustache !
6950287 Why thank you
what an unique and interesting concept
and with flawless execution to boot
i want to die
6950756 Thanks. Glad you like it
I thought the story was awesome! Maybe I can write like this sometime.
gag kissing. but i guess it was okay
Some errors here and there, but all and all good, we should work together sometime
6967382 Sure! I'd love to work with a friend
6968878 cool, I will PM you about it
6969541 Cool
6949403 Alright, I was able to edit it yesterday.
7101033 That's good.
Ayy, that was pretty great!
Have a high five.
7314883 Thanks
Amaze. I love this ship you really brought it toghether. My favorite part of Equestria girls is that Spikes a dog and he can't win over sweetie bell in that form.(probably.) [Hopefully not]