I'm simply a mad man who enjoys driving others mad. That way other people can see things from my perspective.
Harmony Chorus was supposed to be nothing more than a fictional character, nothing more than a series of sentences. Much to Hue's surprise, she turned out to be so much more, and wants to be a part of the real world. How will her life change when her wish is finally granted?
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I really like this story c:
Now that is an interesting story, works well as a one shot, but would work really nice as a full story too :D
It was cute
I found the start hard to get into for some reason, so it actually took me a few tried to get through this story, but the hardship passed about a third of the way in. Pretty interesting story. Though it got me thinking about a world dying because the author finished it's story... Storywise, it was pretty lighthearted throughout. Nice slice of light, light tension with Teal's mystery appearance (who's cutie mark hints at a possible greater plot if this turned into something more) and the likely connected onslaught of ponies on earth. Pretty satisfactory read over all.
I like this a lot, especially the idea that there are other authors out there who had their OCs appear to them as real figments of their imagination. That said, I had a problem with how Hue just taking Harmony everywhere and no one freaking out (I didn't see her cast no invisibility spell). Also, why wasn't Harmony surprised at finding another pony who was just like her? (that had a human author)
Keep it up though, I want to see where this goes!
(The whole thing is just too cute! 
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Underrated story #1 in my list. Well FUCKING done.
7015720 Thanks, idk about other people but when I make characters they kind of take on a life of their own, hence this story. Wasn't sure if it would get rained on or not
7015162 I like to think that other authors and artist put a bit of their heart and soul into what they type or draw. Other ponies were out and about, which is why she wanted to go with Hue and see the world for herself.
7015057 Thanks, sorry if it seemed a bit rough, I've been getting ready for a huge tournament and a lot of my focus has been on that. I actually tried to write a second chapter for this, and just couldn't. I have bits and pieces, but when I try to focus on something else my mind turns to mush. So it'll have to be on hold.
Beware the Funyuns.
Massively underrated.
I know this is supposed to be light and fluffy but I want to see an exploration of the consequences of Harmony's wish.
Wasn't sure if you'd see this before it drops. Congrats and I look forward to reading this story.
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I really like this! Please continue.
Also, fucking toys man. I bet it was a Twilight Sparkle doll.
Yay, a chapter ( mind be like ). *dis is going to be gud
Also keep it up this is a good story so far, cant wat for moar
Wow, so Teal just moved Harmony to be in the same "story" as Hue essentially making her real to that world. What throws me odd is that Teal then switched and took over what was Harmony's story and furthered the plot?
Gonna be interesting to see where this goes.
I'm still snickering about the mail. A well designed sculpture, I'm sure.
The plot is interesting so far. I'm interested in finding our just what Teal is
Also, I think you story could benefit from an editor, at least to make reading it slighty easier.
7037890 I didn't unfortunately, but thanks
7039143 There's a bit more to it than that, but that will come later.
7039772 That is the big question, what or who is Teal? Also, I have started to look into it, and have before.
7039350 A very fine sculpture indeed
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But it was a good guess though.
What? only artist and writers? What about SFM programmers? And musicians! And Game Masters for Ponyfinder or other ponified game systems!
But that aside, Harmony will be in for a rude awakening... hopefully her pony eyes (will save DC20, +5 diplomacy check) will be enough to tide her over. Also, now you have me wondering if that's what happened in the Final End from the Season 5 finale. Everypony stopped caring and the world died. Maybe since Twilight never met the Mane six MLP was cancelled after the first season! The humans had no interest! The world withered away!
See what you do to me? You make me come up with these weird random ideas...
Halt! Typo Police! Put your fingers in the air like you just don't care!
Oi... sorry, that one got away from me and somehow turned from 'police' to 'dance'...
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Anyway, role-play, not roll play.
7039143 Haven't starting reading it yet, but by what you said it reminds me of the plothole character in Excel Saga. Probably the most random anime ever made.
7057078 Hmm, perhaps I should have been a bit more broad with "artist" as that applies to anyone who makes songs (song artist) as well as sfm, which I enjoy when I'm sad or in a bad mood, I'll have to expand on that a bit later, thanks for pointing that out, and sorry
As for the other part, you'll just have to wait and see.
Harmony will have to learn to deal with all types of humans.
Also, Teal is looking more and more like she has some nefarious goal in mind.
Teal does career advising now? So multi-talented
I thought Teal was a pretty common pony name. Hue is almost a weird human name. Almost.
No! Don't join the coffee side, Harmony!
Teal and her human forgot about each other? Why do I have the feeling that this will become important later on...?
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Goooood. Good. Let the coffee flow through you!
Hmm... why do I get a feeling Hue knows who Teal is. I think he may have been her human before he came up with Harmony.
And thus the crazy starts \o3o/
7087998 Hue...
Clearly this was deliberately not spelled 'Hugh' to prevent this from being a reference:
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I'm on to you...
Should I post what the binary translates to?
I'm reminded of the story 'Redshirts', in which the protagonists come to realize that a TV show from an alternate universe (Classic Star Trek with the serial numbers filed off) is somehow forcing their reality in line with it and trying to stop this before they get killed by exploding consoles or rubber-masked aliens or some other contrived, only-there-for-cheap-drama death. The twist at the end is that the main character realizes that he is, in fact, in a story about such a situation and has a brief conversation with an author avatar before the story ends.
The plot thickens...
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If you want you can. In spoilers would be preferable if you do
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Hue is a play on Human. I do enjoy that particular borg episode though
still, I don't usually do or name things without a greater purpose in mind.
7139036 I shall create a pony named 'Steve'. Steve the pony will have a cutie mark of a Rolodex. He'll be employed as the day manager of a fishing tackle shop.
Destiny passed him by when it was handing out names and Cutie Marks....
And yet, immune to fate, his is the greatest power of all... (epic meta fic...)
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Yes please!
Yay! Update!
Good so far
This was very cute. I loved this story. Good job man!
I don't know man. It was really confused and confusing. The pacing was all over the place, at times too slow, and at others completely rushed.
And the relationship beetween the worlds, the stories, the human, the ponies... It was just so not explored and explained properly.
It may be just me mis-reading things, but I felt like you did not really care about that story.
This was true hidden gem of a story. I am glad to have read to its conclusion. Thank you for writing this for me and others to enjoy.
7238300 I did care about the story. I will admit it was a bit fast, but it was supposed to be a fun story. I just wanted to have fun with this one.
7254320 Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.
The link between the Human world and Equestria was just so confusingly written that I'm not sure what to make of it. Can Hue travel at will between Equestria and Earth? Is he stuck there permanently? Just what is going on?
That said, I do like how Sable Template/Harmony broke free from her "programming" by Hue as a villain.
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I couldn't help but consider 'Hue' as a play on words when his lack of colouring was mentioned...
So he ordered from BD. Cause I sure as hell can't think of any other place where hed get something similar.
You theoretically could do a sequel, but it would mostly involve interaction between worlds unless you have a plot in mind
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This was sort of meant to be a one and done, but maybe, with a little rewriting, and maybe to clear some things up since this one bounced a bit.
I wont let it end, huh?
Also, can I count this as a reference to DDLC?
I'm glad I've returned to this story, it's a good read
I really enjoyed reading your story and your style of writing. I'll certainly check your other fics
Well that's some error.
Fuck! We have a soul-sucking shape shifting succubus pony as our enemy!
Yep, Doppelganger/Teal is most definitely a Keter-class threat.