Would It Matter If I Was? Is an interesting story a little fun to wonder if the shy Fluttershy is a changeling. So many things would fit! The Stare! Her little animal friends feeding her love and devotion. Her physical changed during the story of BATS. Of corse, the craziness of Twilight going insane wondering if it would matter if she was.
Such delightful craziness Discord had to get on the act. Well of corse he wouldn't ask if he was a changeling that would be redundant it been done. No, he asks another question. Would it Matter if he was really Star Swirl the Bearded. Oh, it's such a joy seeing twilight twitch so.
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A little short, but the idea is very great.
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But interesting Idea, and would explain Starswirl's incomplete spell.
Too many to type on a phone. Interesting idea, funny in a way but lacks punch. It's aight.
Like 7014409 said, it's an interesting twist on the idea. But, the story needs some more twists - some more zaniness, given that it's Discord involved - to make it really memorable.
(Also, there're enough grammar errors to make it almost look like Discord typed up the story for you. Do you have a friend who knows grammar and can proofread it for you?)
Well, given that in the comics Star Swirl does have a personality similar to Pinkie Pie, Discord could theoretically be an evolution of that zaniness.
Sadly I don't have anyone to double check my stuff. I have a bad case of Dyslexia so spelling is shot as well as other problems that add to the grammar errors. Programs just don't get everything. Messing up words that have different spelling but similar sounds are my biggest mistakes.
I have been trying to make the story a bit better in terms of longer and a bit more Discordish. This one been in my files for a time just not sure how to have made it have a bit more punch. Did notice I forgot about Spike and I could perhaps have Twilight act up a tad more in the library as she panics over the whole baby shower thing.
I think I have a few ideas that could expand this story. The problem is it changes the story from Discord teasing Twilight to him having a near emotional breakdown as the Starswirl past start to affect him.
The second problem it changes the idea he was just teasing I made it so he wasn't proving or disproving the idea just bring it up. If I go with the more emotional affected Discord finally coming to grips with this past then it would be him saying yes he is Starswirl.