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Fuck. Known one day as 'Mistress Spectrum'.

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This story is a sequel to She Took my Hand and Said...


After the night of the great Fall Formal, Sunset Shimmer dates Twilight and she decides to do what she promised weeks before: taking her to a date, their first official one. It was going to be perfect! But something is bothering Twilight, something in the corners of her mind. And her knight in leather jacket was there for her.


Edited by Crysis Commander, thanks! Go follow him for some cool stuff :raritywink:
Art by PastelButtons!

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Aww, a very sweet story. There's a reason I love this pairing!:heart: You get a fave for this story, Mistress!

I'll preface this by saying that I did like the story.

It's just that I liked the first one better. I feel like although the emotional stakes are higher, the gravity of it doesn't match. Like, Sunset's homesickness and their declaration of love should be big, dramatic moments and conflicts. And they aren't.

This was a really fun fic to read. Though honestly the idea of a fair during the winter is incredibly strange.

Why did you name Maplehoof as feferi? :applejackunsure:

7299957 FUCK. How could I forget precious pure Maplehoof?! (Maple is literally a MLP reference, HOW COULD I?) :rainbowlaugh: BTW, probably because... Feferi was the first one who came into mind? Dunno, I just like her a lot. :rainbowlaugh:

7298426 7299342 I'm happy you two like it! :rainbowkiss: But about the fair being in the winter: there's a lot of places in which fairs occur during Holiday season or next to it and maybe a little after it. :raritywink:

She Took me to the Fair...

...and sold me to the Freak Show.

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Also, since she was so pink, I thought that dear Sweet Sweet Sweet Sweet Fefeta might be another good option. :twilightsheepish:

This was so sweet and adorable! :rainbowkiss:
Great job on this, and Sunlight is pretty much my light too!

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Yes, yes, continue.

7303747 Your avatar is adorable as well, oh my god :heart: I'm happy you like it!

7302281 Poor, poor, precious, sweet, dear Fefeta, the light of Roxy's life :pinkiesad2:

Another great story. Keep it up. I love these two.

Twilight could swear Cadance would write a romantic and domestic fanfiction about them if she could… She prefered not thinking about that, because that would be… weird.

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Just when I think i've escaped homestuck... it comes back to haunt me in my shipfics... how dare...

10/10 would ship again

7397588 YOU CAN'T FIGHT THE HOMESTUCK, IT WILL GO ON AND ON AND ON AND ON~

10/10 comment, would read again. Happy to see you enjoy it!

what comic was sunset talking about

Is this a Sci-Twi x sunset? or pony princess?

Twilight frowned, looking at the sky and letting out a pained sigh. The display had finished and people were already leaving. She had spended a lot of time thinking…

Spent

“Well I do, but” - she took another bite - “I don’t need to be treated like a kid. I already graduated…” she blushed, frustrated.

It's still winter, you don't graduate for another few months. :ajbemused:

Spike let out a whine. He wanted to say something, but unfortunately, the “talking dog” effect from the magical portals had faded a few weeks after the Friendship Games. Spike would probably have told Twilight to stop worrying, but she probably would get back to being paranoid not long after. He let out a sigh.

Huh, so that explains why he hasn't talked much, still surprises me it stayed in the eqg series for the remainder of it's run. :applejackunsure:

“Twilight, your knight in leather jacket is here to rescue her damsel in distress.” It was Shining Armor with his usual playful smile. He had been there for the Holiday season, but both he and Cadance had already moved into a house of their own. They’d be starting a family of their own in a few months, after all.

lol, knight in leather jacket. :rainbowlaugh:

“Yeah, it is. Celestia dressed as a pirate and I was the captain. Ponies were so impressed their princess was out there with a little filly collecting candy.” Sunset laughed, shaking her head. That night, Celestia made a cake out of some candies they got. She thought that, for a princess who never cooked for herself, Celestia was a pretty good baker.

How sweet of her. :twilightsmile:

Sunset slept snuggled up with Twilight that night and in the next morning she was there for her, showing she cared and showing she wouldn’t leave her. She wanted to and would stay there with her, and she didn’t plan on changing that anytime soon.

A sign of their true love they have for one another. 😊

honestly we stan the gays

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