Scootaloo screamed as she felt the huge claws of the manticore rip through her side, watching in an almost dazed trance as she saw blood splatter onto Applebloom and Sweetie Belle’s faces.
’Oh wait...that’s....that’s my blood.’ the thought echoed in her head as she slowly fell towards the ground, body numb. Her vision slowly went black as she laid on the forest floor, blood gradually pooling beneath her still form.
The manticore, sure that one of its prey was down, turned to the other two defenceless and frozen fillies. Mouth agape, it lunged forwards, aiming to snap the neck of the one with the red bow atop its head, however it was unable to reach it, with a confused glace it tilted its head to peer behind it, where the lionlike creature saw a slim, red fox with a large bushel of tails holding it back by its stinger with its front paws that looked like diamond dog hands. With a sharp grin, the fox gave a humongous tug and pulled the manticore from the ground, its claws creating huge trenches in the dirt and held it in the air in an impressive stunt of strength, then the manticore’s back slammed into the ground with a large crash.
With a fang-filled snarl Kurama stared down his opponent, body becoming battle ready.
’It’s about time I kill something worthwhile’
“TWI, WHY ARE WE RUNNING?” Applejack shouted, her more athletic body allowing her to easily keep up with Twilight as the rest of the Elements of Harmony followed behind.
“THE CMC, THEY’RE MISSING, AND I’VE GOT A REALLY BAD FEELING WITH PINKIE’S DOOZY, SO WE HAVE TO FIND THEM FAST AND RAINBOW ISN’T ALLOWED TO FLY THAT FAST” Twilight shouted back, eyes frantically jumping around as she sprinted down the main road of Ponyville.
“TWILIGHT DARLING STOP AND TALK TO US!” Rarity shouted, sweat pouring down her face as slowly Twilight stopped, turning to face them with a wild look in her eyes.
“What! We can’t waste time here we need to find them at all costs!”
“Twilight instead of rushing into things use your egghead brain!” Rainbow Dash was, surprisingly, the voice of reason again, “You’re much smarter than all of us so find a use for us instead of just follow you!”
Slowly, the wild look in Twilight’s eyes left as she panted heavily.
“You’re...you’re right Rainbow...today hasn’t been a good day...Okay, a plan, plan plan plan...” Suddenly, an idea popped into Twilights head, one that could work, “Rainbow! You can’t fly fast but you can still be our eyes in the sky, get as many pegasi as possible to look for them and report back to us if you find them.”
“Gotcha!” With a salute, Rainbow Dash flew off, not as fast as she could but still enough to be a blur as she moved.
“Fluttershy, see if you can get your animal friends to tell if they’ve seen them nearby.”
“O-Okay Twilight, I hope they’re alright...” With that said, the yellow pegasus flew off at a hurried pace.
“Applejack, go back to your farm and see if you can get Winona to help find them and Big Mac in case there’s something heavy we need to push or break, I’m sure you remember when he pulled that house along”
“Ahm not sure he could redo that sugar cube but as soon as he hears Applebloom’s in danger he’ll become unstoppable” With that said, Applejack turned to the directions of Sweet Apple Acres and sprinted off.
“Rarity, stay with me and you can teach me that gem finding spell and we can see if we can adjust it to find Sweetie Belle”
“Right Darling, by why only Sweetie?” Rarity asked with a slight breathlessness, still recovering from the sprint.
“Because you and her have the same DNA so it’s easier to configure it to her” Twilight explained before turning to the last pony still there,” Pinkie...” The still deflated mare looked up, eyes blank.
“Yes Twilight?” The tone was dead.
“I know you’re not in the best state of mind, but with Rainbow injured, you’re currently the fast one we have, so I need you to go around Ponyvillie gathering anypony you know, but more importantly those with tracking skills, please Pinkie...I need you....The Crusaders need you as well...” The pink mare stared at Twilight, face becoming harder with determination as a slight fire lit up in her eyes.
“You’re right Twilight, I can’t let them down” With that said, the pink mare became a pink line as she zoomed off, quickly becoming a missile seeking help.
’If only Kurama was here...he could have helped look for them...’ Twilight quickly shook her head free of such thoughts.
“Come on Rarity, lets head to the library, there’s books that can help us plus Spike can see if the Princesses can come down to help as well” With that said, Twilight and Rarity turned towards the direction of the library.
'What am I thinking, Kurama wouldn't help just because somepony was in danger...'
Kurama and the manticore charged at one another, the manticore lashing out with a paw but Kurama easily batting it away with one tail before lunging forwards at the wing of the manticore but missing as the manticore swirled around and smacking him away with the thick scorpion stinger.
'That stinger is annoying, suppose it would be best if I were to sort that out'
The manticore's stinger trembled slightly, revealing deep scratches in the chitin from where it came into contact with Kurama's fur, with a grin Kurama shot towards the weak point, twirling his slim body around the manticores slow hits and leaping upon the back, nestling himself between the wings, wrapping his tails around them as well as the neck of the manticore, while facing towards the tail.
With a loud growl, Kurama rammed his claws into the segment closest to the main body of the manticore, causing it to roar in pain as it tried to buck him off, jumping around frantically as Kurama slowly pried the tail off, thick gloopy blood squirting outwards, splattering onto Kurama's face. With a great heave, the tail came free and along with it a horrifying scream of pain escaped from the manticore's jaw.
With a twirl, Kurama swung himself around the manticore, latching onto its left forearm with his razor-sharp teeth as his fur carved great trenches into the flesh of the beast, a brutal snap echoing through the forest as the wings were twisted way past their breaking point and were yanked off as well, making small fountains of blood erupt from the back of the manticore.
The Biju used his tails that were still wrapped around the neck of the lion beast to heave it to the ground, ripping the forearm still in his mouth out the elbow and crunching through the bones easily, snapping it in twine. The manticore once again let out a roar of agony before Kurama leaped onto its chest, claws slashing around the muzzle and eyes of the beast before he grinned a vile smirk. Still pinning the manticore down, he grabbed the jaws of the beast and started to slowly pry them open.
Applebloom and Sweetie Belle stared in horror as monsters battled it out in front of them, the Red Furred One instantly having the upper hand and now it stood upon the manticore, ignoring all of its attempts to throw it off, the Red being having surprisingly a huge amount of strength despite its thin frame.
As they stared, the Red One has forced open the mouth of the manticore, its own mouth slowly widening as a deep and primordial voice rang out.
"Open Wide"
With that said, flames erupted from the maw of the Red Being, quickly engulfing the upper face of the manticore. Immediately, the smell of burning hair and flesh hit the noses of the two fillies and they were quick to start puking at the horrid smell, still watching the quickening movements of the manticore, both the uninjured and the stump of an paw beating at the Red Things side, having no effect as the Being continued to breath flames.
The manticore didn't know where it went wrong, it went out to hunt as it usually does, crippling one of its prey just as it was taught by its parents and just as it was teaching its cubs, so while it was pinned by the monster that had simply played with it and having its face slowly cooked it thought about what it could have done different.
'Maybe I shouldn't have attacked those ponies' Was the last thought that ran through its head as its eyeballs popped and the blood inside the brain boiled and burst.
Flames stopped exiting Kurama's mouth as he pulled away and looked at his handiwork, staring at the disfigured and melted face beneath him as the hair and fur continued to burn away. The lower jaw, surprisingly still intact, was pulled from the burnt face it was still attached to and thrown to the side as Kurama saunter off his kill towards the fillies, his form losing sharpness it had while fighting, where the overwhelming smell of stomach contents and blood was emitting from.
"S-stay back or Ah'll....Ah'll hurtcha" The trembling yellow filly shouted at him, standing surprisingly strong for a pony with vomit coating its mouth.
"If you wish for your friend to live, I would suggest you to move, I've saved your lives...I have no reason to save hers" That said, the yellow and white fillies turned to look at their orange, scratch that, their red furred friend.
"SCOOTALOO!" They both ran over to her, ignored the blood that pooled at their hooves as they reached to roll her over.
"Don't move her fools, otherwise you'll lose any chance for her to survive" Kurama walked over to the three, red eyes roaming around the fallen pony, looking to see the true extent of the injuries, "hmph, if we move fast she might live, might" with that said, one of Kurama's tails reached out to wrap around the originally orange pony, completely engulfing her in its warm fur, "How fast can you two move? Never mind", two more tails quickly wrapped around the two non-injured fillies, leaving only their heads unwrapped and held them close to his body.
"Try not to puke on me or else I'm dropping you" Kurama was then off, tearing into the forest towards Ponyville, simply barrelling through trees underneath the darkening sky.
Twilight stood at the head of a large crowed, Spike upon her back and the rest of the Elements of Harmony split on either side of her, Rarity, Fluttershy and Pinkie to her left, Rainbow Dash and Applejack to her right.
"Okay everypony! Fluttershy's animal friends have confirmed that Applebloom, Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo went into the Everfree Forest and have not yet returned, so we are all going to go in and rescue them, remember, there is safety in numbers as well as all me teaching all the unicorns here a flare spell, so stick with at least one unicorn and remember, if you get lost its yellow flares, if you get attacked its red and if you find them its green, so remember those colours!" Twilight turned away from the crowd of determined ponies as Spike leapt to the ground, "Let's go everypony!"
"YEAH!"
"SAVE THE FILLIES
"LET'S DO THIS YEAHHHHH"
Everypony turned to look at the white pegasus with small wings.
"Uhm...sorry..." Twilight shook her head and looked into the forest.
'Don't worry you three, help is on...the....way?' In the middle of her thoughts the ground began to shake and trees in the distance fell to some unseen creature, quickly making its way to the large group of ponies. Quickly, red flares were shot up into the sky as unicorns panicked and pegasi took to the air, hoping to get a look at what it was.
All of a sudden, Kurama, now easily the size of the average house of Ponyville, broke through the tree line, red eyes widening slightly at the panicking crowd before they zeroed in on Twilight.
"TWILIGHT, WHERE'S THE HOSPITAL, ARGH NEVER MIND" Instead of stopping, Kurama leaped over the crowd, flinging one of his tails at Twilight and wrapping it around her. Twilight stared blankly at the fur coiled around her barrel, before looking towards her friends, then she was pulled into the sky after the huge fox.
"WAAAAAAAH"
Off into the distance Kurama ran to Ponyville, one more passenger screaming instructions into his ears.
Kurama and the Elements of Harmony minus three stared into a hospital room through a visitation window, showing three unconscious fillies hooked up to many different machines and their respective sisters or sister figures.
"Kurama...I-I want to-" Twilight tried to begin.
"Twilight shut up. Nothing you say to me has any worth, thanking me for saving them? I was simply in a good mood after a fresh kill, if it had been me to see them first I can assure you, I wouldn't be standing here and they would not be laid there, luckily there was something much more worthwhile than children," Kurama glanced to Twilight's paling face, red eyes glaring deep into her soul as the meaning behind his words hit, "And if you apologise you would be killing them, for if your hypocritical ways hadn't appeared, I would have continued to think there was a chance here and not entered that forest, meaning I would have never killed that creature and it would have continued as it pleased" with that said, Kurama turned away and started to walk away.
"I don't care" That made Kurama stop and turn back towards the purple mare, brow raised.
"It doesn't matter if you hate me, you still could have just left after killing the manticore, leaving Applebloom, Sweetie belle and S-Scootaloo in the forest and we would of never known, but you made the choice to take them back to Ponyville and even put aside your hatred of me enough to ask me for directions to the hospital so you could save them" Twilight then bowed low to the ground, "So I thank you, not for saving them but for making the choice, I won't beg for forgiveness or a second chance as I know I don't deserve one, so in the morning I'll send a letter to Princess Celestia so she can select a new guide for you."
Kurama stared at the bowing mare, red eyes glowing slightly.
"The only things I hate is a woman named Kaguya and a man named Madara, as well as the accursed Sharingan, you are not worth hating, so don't bother messaging the white mare, there’s no point in me getting a new guide, besides" Kurama grinned, showing off sharp teeth, "there isn't a guarantee I will be able to scare the next one so easily as you"
Twilight looked back up, a slight grin on her face and tears of happiness appearing before the situation once again hit her and the grin and happiness disappeared, becoming tears of sadness quickly as she stared back into the room along with her two other friends.
Kurama turned back, making his way outside the hospital, ignoring the way he was stared at and growled at anyone who came close to call him a hero. When he was outside he laid on the cobblestone paved on the ground, ignoring the way small stones stabbed into his stomach as he stared into the night sky and watched the stars.
'Did I do the best thing...Naruto, Father?
Rainbow Dash stared with blank eyes, watching Scootaloo sleep under the medically induced slumber, listening to the high-pitched beeping of the life support, there just in case something was to happen during the night.
Pink eyes roamed the small fragile body of the pegasus filly, drifting along the bandaged side.
'I....I wanted to see you become the fastest...faster than even me...'
Tears slowly leaked from the corners of her eyes and she finally allowed herself to break down on the side of Scootaloo's hospital bed.
A stump where a wing once was sat innocently unaware of the agony it has and will cause.
ohhhh Scoot's isn't going to like that discovery. But I will say that so far I'm enjoying this story, and I hope to see more!
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I don't think anyones gunna like the discovery *ducks under brick*
Scoot won’t like it one bit.
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*blocks a second brick* Wonder if any of the other Biju will appear *fingers crossed for the Two-Tail and Eight-Tail*
Welp... I guess this means that Scoot will become the new Rock Lee, since she cannot use ninjutsu, anymore.
Well most people are talking about the ending more than the fight....so....I think i did good...
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Nope, CUTIEMAKE CRUSADERS PTSD PATIENTS YAY.....all joking aside (PTSD is not a true laughing matter) they're all gunna be in a bad place for the next few chapers, thats probably what i'll focus on for a bit, so whats coming? Pinkies welcome and thank you for saving the CMC party...then after that? the arc i've already got mostly planned out....the Crystal Empire....
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Why thank you for stopping that one, and as for other Biju? maybe...I want to integrate as much as i can with reasonable explanations, i've already got the chakra to magic one ready for a future chapter so y'all can be ready for science...
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I did not even think of that...i just did what i thought to be most traumatic to you readers...i hope i did well
Also just a normal question, anyone know how tall (in meters) the average ponyville house is? why?.....*looks towards images referencing Ursor Minor and Major sizes while compared to Kurama* no reason...
Oh, my heart just broke a little at that, and then you had to break it some more with this!
You know Scootaloo and Naruto have some interesting similarities
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My mental image is, Kurama could of easily stopped the manticore doing any harm...but he hesitated, and as we know, hesitation in the Ninja world can lead to injury or worse, death
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Yeah... It can really.
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Aside from being orange?
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I see Rainbow as Naruto, and Scootaloo as Boruto, really if you ask me.
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*eyes jump about nervously* w-what are you on about? if theres any similarities it is completly coincidental....
That was a great chapter. Don't back down from what you wrote. To many writers take the "safe" path that doesn't have any consequences to the characters. What you wrote might upset some but I for one like that you didn't follow the same tropes that many would have done.
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Back down from what i wrote? if thats you asking if im gunan make some magical miracle that heals Scootaloo...well...no, there won't be at all, the thing that i've learnt these past 2 years has been that every action has consequences, whether you see them or don't
Edit: Woh woh woh i just looked at your profile and i saw you literally made an account today...was that to comment on my story? if so im honoured, if not....let me have my moment XD
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To answer your edit yes I did make an account to comment on your story. Been a lurker on this site for awhile but I wanted to express how much I liked how you went with your story. Thank you for what you have written I look forward to see where you go from here.
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Squeeeeeee i remember when i was a lurker, but then i got the idea for this story and so i decided to make an account and start on this
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ahh... nothing like a near-tragic disaster with a side side of consequences to help set the mood
Honestly I was kind of hoping for an actual death
Not gonna lie, I kind of want Kurama to become something akin to All Might for Scootaloo.
Kurama: Yes Scootaloo, you too can become a flyer!
Nice chapter. I like that Kurama's moral compass seems to have nothing to do with the ponies and is completely based on Kurama trying to do Naruto proud. I hope Scootaloo makes a full recovery, perhaps with something from Kurama. He's had eons, perhaps he could heal her with nature chakra.
On that note, I also hope Kurama is more powerful than the tree of harmony, mostly because it would fit in with Naruto canon.
Please tell me there will be some Scootaloo and Kurama bonding in the future. Like will Kurama give Scootaloo some his chakra so she can fly like Naruto does when his in his Kyuubi mode?
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W-w-what? lawyor, Godzilla doesn't own that move its a free stock move in fights theres not copyright! (To be honest i only rememebred that after you said, i suppose its just coincidenc?)
AND THANKS FOR THE HELP WITH MISS SPELLINGS AND GRAMMAR I ABSOLUTLY HATE IT
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Tis the perfect mood for a story no?
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Jesus you're a dark one....well...we'll have to see where the story goes ey?
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Kurama like all might....hm...welp you'll have to see hehe......(also you've made me have the idea of making a one-shot with Bakugo appearing in the middle of the changeling invasion)
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Yeah, Kurama ain't changing to fit in with ponies, so expect more of this mentality....and fuck i forgot about the tree of harmony....now you're making me think of how to impliment that....also along those lines, what about when Tirek's running around trying to take all the magic from equestria eh?
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Wow everyone wants Kurama and scoots the bond...is it the orange fur? Just wait for the oncoming chapters XD
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I think it's because it would be a nice start for Kurama to show the ponies his kinder side and help them grow not just closer but also grow as characters.
Plus Scootaloo is bound to agonize and despair over her lost wing but I wouldn't be surprised if she pulls herself out of it, determined to still find a way to fly somehow. I think if Kurama were to witness that then he would be reminded of Naruto and be motivated to help her.
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Damn, I wanted to get the next chapter out before but it's been fighting me...Anyway small announcement, I'm going on holiday today (1st August) and won't be back for 10 days so I can't really update this story during that time...sorry for everyone who wanted new update it's gonna be a bit later, but on another note has anyone seen the new trailer for Venom??
Hnnnnng it looks good and comes out after my birthday so I'll have some moneyyyyy (rent +car insurance is a bitch)
Anyway, see yah in 10 days!
Ain't it gonna be fun when Kurama mentions that he can probably regrow said wing but it still has its risk
Mainly maybe Magic and Chakra ain't too compatible and may make things worse
Or he winds up overdoing it and making her explode into a gory mess..... That's one mental image I wish I never imagined
Or the most obvious one at the moment there isn't anybody who can act as a filter for his Chakras corrosive nature
It doesn't really matter whether Kurama is in nice guy mode or not his Chakra has always been corrosive due to his technically true nature being the rampaging Shinju and just its sheer overwhelming and overpowering nature
That was how the Shinobi alliance was able to be given a Cloak by Naruto
He was acting as the filter that removed the bad and negative parts of Kurama's Chakra
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The issue with Tirek?
Kurama has the first real fight he can actually somewhat enjoy
He can even enjoy it close to his actual size so that's just a wonderful bonus for him
Especially since he can hurl things at mountains again
And shout his favorite line in a crack fic I once read
"I am the Mighty Nine Tailed Fox Kurama child of Hagoromo and friend of Naruto AND I COMMAND YOU TO MOVE YOU STUPID ROCK FORMATION! "
Tirek is gonna have a great time trying to eat Kurama's energy(psst no he isn't)
And forgot to add this on my first one
Yep definitely saw Venom
I know where my saved up money is going too
On the Scootaloo matter
I'm on the fence on it really
Since she mainly resembles Naruto's bratty kid self more than his teenage self that really grew close with Kurama with the young version just getting on Kurama's nerves
But who knows maybe she'll develop in away that would endear her to Kurama and help her with the wing by regrowing it that's what character development is for in stories after all
Scootaloo getting injured (permanently, at that) was definitely the way to go. Much more interesting.
*cough* I mean, how could you?!
That injury must of had some benefits.
I’m surprised she didn’t already write to celestia.