• Member Since 13th Sep, 2015
  • offline last seen Apr 26th, 2017

Cushionfighter4


love writing,i am a hobbyist traditional/digital artist and i'm a pianist

T
Source

Scootaloo turn 13, the age that you discover who you are going to be. But before opening her presents, her mother has to tell her something, something that will change her life forever. Frustrated, angry, sad and confused Scootaloo runs to the park and sits in front of the pond, where a surten rainbow coloured mained mare came to comfurt her and told her everything.

cover by http://studentlaure.deviantart.com/

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 10 )

too rushed. It should have been longer before she fled the house.

Dang this story is getting good

7226733 I'm not very good at paising. But thank you :scootangel:
edit: i updated it, some more dramatical effect.

Still very interesting

It's great so far. It balances between depressing and a bit of comedy here and there.

Great job.

Login or register to comment