Scootaloo turn 13, the age that you discover who you are going to be. But before opening her presents, her mother has to tell her something, something that will change her life forever. Frustrated, angry, sad and confused Scootaloo runs to the park and sits in front of the pond, where a surten rainbow coloured mained mare came to comfurt her and told her everything.
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Interesting
too rushed. It should have been longer before she fled the house.
Dang this story is getting good
7226733 I'm not very good at paising. But thank you
edit: i updated it, some more dramatical effect.
7228039 thanks
Still very interesting
Awww
It's great so far. It balances between depressing and a bit of comedy here and there.
Great job.
7567673 thank you very much
7569234 your welcome