I mainly write Discord stories and oc stories.
My OC Jingle jangle has his whole life changed when he gets his cute mark. Discord finds him crying in sorrow and decides to help him. He grows up not know what it is like to have a real childhood. Jingle jangle's studies with Discord ends up getting Princess Celestia, Princess Luna, and even Star swirl the bearded mad at him.
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I'm sorry but the flow of this story is just a bit too off for me
7166125 Thank you for pointing that out for me I will take that into consideration for future story and chapters.
Is this a Warhammer 40K crossover? I only ask because I'm fairly sure that picture is from Warhammer 40K.
7224907 no it is not it is just a coincidence.
ok i like it could be a good story so lets see what happens next
7312744 thank you and i am half way done with the next chapter so you will see soon.
Oke, I'm going to be honest with you.
For me, I tried to read it but the pasing is way to fast.
There are quite a lot of grammar mistakes but those will get better the more you write.
Try to read the chapters a few times for yourself before posting them, see if there are any mistakes that you might have missed. It will help you improve your writing and grammar skills. And don't be afraid to ask for help, I would do so myself but I am to busy ad it is.
For now I will downvote this, but I might come back later.
I hope to see some improvements in the future.
-The Library.
7340209 I will take that into consideration and try to improve past and future chapters.
Awesome chapter. Many ideas about how to creat chaos. Now I am very interested.
7472058 I am glad to hear that this story still keeps people engaged in the premiss of chaos magic.
What made you decide on the cover art?
7605896 its the universal sign for chaos a arrow that points in every direction.