POVs Of Discorded De-Harmonized Ponies
"The Truth Can Be Deceiving" Applejack
Ah didn't ever lied before. Ain't now. Ain't ever!
Okay, so Ah reckon' Ah was sometimes dead wrong 'bout some things. Maybe Ah couldn't buck the entire orchard by myself. Maybe helpin' with ah tricky stunt, bakin', and herdin' bunnies what ain't the bright when Ah was half-asleep.
So Ah didn't tell Pinkie Pie 'bout her surprise birthday. But Ah didn't tell her nothin' that ain't true!
Okay . . . maybe . . . maybe Ah did kinda sorta hog the bed from Rarity that one here time an' said Ah was asleep when Ah really wasn't. But . . . but come on! It ain't a lie if ya ain't really tryin' to trick'em right?
Elements of Harmony Stolen. Into The Maze. Separated from the others. Grove of Truth.
Ah see us all. Sayin' we're done with each other. Goin' back ta before when Twili' first showed up in Ponyville.
Ah don't know what we'll say ta each other. But Ah know it ain't right. If this here is where honesty leads . . . broken friendships, broken hearts, hateful words . . . it ain't worth it.
Ain't it just better if everything is just wrapped up in sweet peaceful lies?
Don't tell yer friend what you really think of their music they like but you don't. Don't tell ya parents what ya really thank of what they think. Don't say bad things, even if they're true, don't say harsh things, even if they're true, don't say anything that might upset things even if they're true. ESPECIALLY if they're true! Isn't that what Rarity is always sayin' bein' polite is all about? Isn't bein' a lady in Manehatten sayin' one thing but meanin' another? Isn't bein' a polite friendly ponyfolk the same thing?
There is one truth Ah'll accept. The truth hurts. The truth is cruel. And Ah won't be part of somethin' that awful again! Sweet little lies are so much kinder.
-Liarjack
Cool. I like it so far. It was hard to read Applejack's, or should I say Liarjack's, accent.
Heavy accent, but interesting story.
Applejack doesn't sound like that! Not even my country country cousins have accents like that!
Unlike everyone else, I don't think the accent was that hard to read, though I don't think it was really necessary given that she won't actually think in an accent.
Question, what is POV. Hehe Any who, I like this so far.
Thus my nostalgia trip into one of my first favorite fics begins, with an accent I don't remember being nearly as annoying to read as it is now.
I'm liking it so far...but the accent is a little off-putting.
Considering honesty is a Apple family value, I'm not surprised.
Reckon, Alex, reckon. Well, at least you're honest with yourself AJ, that's just as important as honesty with others.
Fair enough.
Well, I dunno about that.
I can only imagine how much that had to hurt...
I, ...
I can't really disagree with you there...
Oh dear...
AJ's accent was a bit on the horribly thick side. Also Apple Jack is more than capable of saying the word "the", and ah isn't Ah. Ah = I, ah is a form of exclaimation. And ah isn't a replacement for the word "the". And it's reckon, not reckin.
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Tons better. Thank you very much.
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Okay, this may sound weird, but hear me out...you are one of my favorite authors ever! This story series that you've written is what brought me to this site! I loved reading them; I haven't even finished the series yet, but it's AWESOME!
You are so talented and inspirational! You're just...GAH!
I apologize for being creepy; I just really like your work. ^^;
And now I come back to see the beginning of a long-running saga.
As they say: "Sometimes a lie is easier to take"
I said it on the deviantart page for the chapter. But it still rings true. Discord may have had an appendage in what happened to them. But they were stupid enough to listen to what he showed and said.
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What Discord said wasn't all 100% false. Which is where the show fell flat IMHO.
Like you apparently are right now? Ye gods is your sentence structuring terrible, AJ.
Well, you know what? I decided I was too lazy to wait until I put together an epub, so I'm just reading this now.
I gotta say, the accent is...a bit thick.
That said, at least I understand why this series is called what it is, heh. And this is the first chapter out of like over 400 apparently. Of course, this season appears to be a retelling of the Discording, so obviously the new stuff hasn't happened yet.
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I actually have TONED DOWN Applejack's accent again and again and again, and again.
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POV = P.O.V. = Point Of View
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You can download stories from the main page for that story (not any of the chapters... that willJUST get you the individual chapter) if that helps?