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Starlight Glimmer2,913 stories ·1,547 members

Twilight is Unamuse

Twilight Sparkle lives a very eventful life being both the Princess of Magic and the wielder of the Element of Magic. Most days it's a fun life, full of adventure, wonder, and her amazing group of friends.

Other days... not so much. Mainly due to said friends.

Rated T for hard cider and severely implied RariJack.

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EclipseSight

EclipseSight #1 · Apr 24th, 2016 · · ·

While this certainly was amusing, the events all happened a little too quickly. There were a good few funny lines to keep me entertained but everything else was events just rushing by. That might just be me but I feel it could have been better if you explored just why Twilight is so unamused and how the other characters are dealing with that. Overall though I did enjoy it. Your writing seems fine, though in the first line you spelled alicorn as alacorn. Other than that everything seems okay. I'll be interested to see more from you.

Endless Requiem

Endless Requiem #2 · Apr 24th, 2016 · · ·

7154164 That was one of my pet peeves, the story being so dang short. Thank you for your input! Also, I purposely spell it alacorn. I'm about to make a blog post why.