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Using their combined powers, Twilight Sparkle and Sunset Shimmer create a space inside of the portal between worlds. In this place, natives humans stay human, and ponies stay ponies.
They then decide to bring their friends through, to meet themselves.
There will be a chapter focusing on each of the Mane 6 (minus Twilight), and maybe some extras after that!
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This is a very interesting set-up for a story. I'm curious to see how the characters interact with their alternate selves.
A couple minor corrections:
This is unclear. Are you saying she didn't want to interfere with both ends of the portal? Context makes it seem that she doesn't want to interfere with the web. If that's the case it should say, "she didn't want to interfere with that."
Also, you don't need the commas in the first sentence, but a comma separating the two clauses would be better than starting a sentence with a conjunction. If I might suggest an alternative: "At both ends of the portal she felt the complicated web that was the spell that turned ponies into humans and vice versa, but she didn't want to interfere with that."
"As she"
I've always wanted to see the Mane Six meet the HuMane Six! Can't wait to see where it goes from here.
I have a feeling that Sunset knows about what happened to her human counterpart.. And I got a feeling that it might be not pleasant..
Okay, this sounds interesting. I'm tracking this.
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Thanks for your feedback, I've made the corrections.
And I'm glad for all the positive responses this is getting!
More!
I want to see the human 6 meet pony Sunset Shimmer. ;P
There's the possibility that Sunset Shimmer's copy either dead or not living in the Canterlot area...
I want to see more!
This is good so far, and with an interesting premise. Where will you be taking this after they've all met each other? That may be quite fun to see. So far it's looking quite good.
I'z no mind the lateness of this chapter~ doki
I'z knows the struggles, but I'm probably doing a bit more schoolwork ~ doki
Okay, nice chapter but I have to ask will you be letting more people meet their pony counterparts or just the Mane Six?
This sounds really good so far. Nobody has ever came up with this idea. I can't wait to read more.
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I was originally planning on just the Mane Six, mostly because I'm not sure how well I'd do on the characterization of characters like background ponies. Now that you bring it up, I guess I could expand it into maybe the Princesses and some side characters (maybe Trixie?). Like I said in the new chapter, I'm open to suggestions!
7251985 Oh, you have to do Trixie and the Princesses. Probably better do Derpy as well.
7251985 That's just the thing with background ponies....since they don't really have a cannon characterization for the most part you can get away with a lot more. But, I really meant after all the meet & greet part was done. Not really asking you to tell us what you have planned. Just remarking on the premise you've got here being a good seedbed of ideas for places you can go with things if you decide to go further.
Also, on the subject of ages, thank you for actually making the ponies adults instead of teens themselves. While I don't doubt that some of the ponies (the Pink especially) are younger than the others, they all are certainly adults. Rarity in particular is certainly older than her high school counterpart. It takes a lot of time, even with enormous talent, to do what she has done with her fashions.
Fluttershy should be soon.
this story is really interesting can't wait for more chapters to come keep up the good work my friend
next please
Okay, this is now officially one of my favorite stories on this site if for nothing else but originality. One thing though:
Shouldn't that be "Dash"?
To the Pinkie-Mobile! Na na na!
Not so sure I'm looking forward to the pocket universe imploding because of Pinkie Pie... I'll bet it'll be like the Mirror Pool incident all over again.
7311930 pinkie!!!
This is an interesting idea I haven't seen done before and it's off to a good start.
underlined the mistake in this part. should be began not because. otherwise a really interesting chapter. definitely very unique. on to the next chapter now
ok this is defintely an interesting story. very unique in how it is going. am very much looking forward to how much 2 pinkies in one space are gunna break reality. keep up the good work, also have yourself a like for this amazing story
Congratulations, Sunset, Twilight; you've just done things that even Starswirl the Bearded thought were impossible. I wonder if Celestia and Luna will (with complete seriousness) tell Twilight that every alicorn makes her own world in time?
Cows are talking, intelligent creatures in Equestria.
The book is leather-bound.
Guess what leather is made of...
It's the Earth Pony magic that Twilight brought through into the Meeting Realm - The AJs can feel it and, through it, feel the need to bring life to this new universe. It's in their nature, I think.
Chimpanzees are actually very good artists.
I wonder if Rainbow (the pony Rainbow at least) wonders what she's done. We know that Rainbow can call on her pony powers when her loyalty to her friends is inspired so it is quite possible that, the next time they have a picnic threatened by rain in the human world, the art and science of Weather Management will be born in their world?
Meanwhile, the emergence of soccer in the pony world and its subsequent spreading like wildfire across all continents and sapient species will something minor in comparison!
When you don't have elements of your reproductive physiology flapping around if unconstrained, I suppose that a nudity taboo would simply never emerge in a culture.
A very enjoyable story so far, definitely deserving of the thumbs up and follow.
Patiently waiting for more
7312138 Well, when you invite gryphons, you need to feed them. And since they are sapient (sentient?) why would they waste resources.
Awesome story, I like where this is headed.
In both places, it should be off
"not glad to see me?"
Because > began
I'll keep my eye out in later chapters for more.
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Thank you both for catching those, they have been corrected!
Haven't the two pinkies already met though XD
7312605 Fair point. And how do we know the book was made in Equestria?
I think the new cover is quite fitting, honestly.
7312934 Also a fair point.
What if you have the pinkies finish eachother's sentences? I'm sure pinkie would think of what to say to herself beforehand. And they would both know that the other would do it too, so they try, and fail, to say random words and facts from both worlds that only one of them should know, and they keep going back and forth until the human pinkie runs out of breath. They then ask eachother (not at the same time) how they knew facts from the other world. Like human pinkie knowing that twi is afraid of quesodillias. (I probably butchered that spelling)
I can just see the crazy that goes on with pinkie.
I love this story and I'm eager to see more.
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That wasn't an oversight, but good catch. It was just me not completely explaining the way that I made the portal work. What's basically going on is the portal designates a person/pony's form by the way they come. There's a magical explanation for this in the prologue bit, but it's probably very vague. Since Sunset is coming from the human world, she appears as a human. If she were to go back to Equestria and then enter from the Equestria side, she would be a pony.
I'm definitely enjoying this, it's a neat idea and a fun presentation of it.
I particularly liked the apple trees getting planted, that's a great AJ detail. A small piece of Equestria and not-Equestria growing together in harmony.
Two Rarities sharing ideas? I would love to see the results...
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So would I, but I lack any kind of skills or knowledge in this thing you call "fashion"
7311926 I find that's a happy mistake, made me laugh though I doubt it was spelled like that on purpose.
7345546 True, it was rather funny.
...Is this happening right now? Have I finally found the fic I've been fantasizing about? It is! It's the one where counterparts meet! YES!
7362128 I was fantasizing about the same thing, that's why I wrote it
7362128 you have made that one fic that I have been waiting desperately for someone to write, thx. X )
Yes! RD is best pony!
Should be "fact", I think.