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Warm, good and lovely.
It's decent enough, but I feel as if you tried to cram two separate stories into one. First two chapters was about a mare born of royalty who in spite of her incredible skills is burdened by a disability that prevents her from living her dreams. Fine enough on its own, but then the third chapter comes in and all of a sudden she wants to fuck her dad? Whaa? No hints of it in the previous chapters or anything.
Still, decent enough for me to give a like and fav.
Actually, Cadence is Twilight's sister-in-law, because she's married to Twilight's brother.
Cadence is Twilight's sister-in-law. Step-sister infers Twilight's parents adopted her, not her marrying Shining Armor.
It was okay, but I feel like you could have skipped the first two chapters. They didn't seem to fit all that well with the end clop chapter. I think to fix that, you should have kept the whole story in Starburst POV, and show/hinted at her interest in her father a little more. Like, show some of her thoughts as the story goes on. The end confession of her feelings for Flash just felt out of the blue.
This is kinda hot and cute bonding activity btween father and daughter wish you could make starburst and twilight sparkle clopfic but ala in all best clop i ever read
I wonder if Twilight heard them.
7155783 its labeled as such
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I'd like to think that how something goes from being very sweet to something very dirty, it's all dependent; that's sorta how life can turn out.
Loved editing this! Well done!
nothing like giving your daughter a UTI by going from ass the vaginal
7161758 That's the secret bonus at the end you just need to squint your eyes real hard
Great read, thumbs up!
7162540 I can't find it.
I'm gonna be honest the first two chapters where great, which is why I felt like the last chapter was a little unnecessary. Not bad by any means, just took me out of the story. Still a good read, thanks for writing it.
7155418 7155442 58 weeks.... And that mistake is still there.
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Fine if its that much of a big deal ill fix it. I'm just one who likes to think of them as more than a sister-in-law relationship. Kinda like how some people like the idea of Spike being Twilight's brother.
That's too bad, as I think a sequel is in order...
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I wouldn't bank on it, this story was merely to fulfill a request submitted to me.
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Fucc...
She shouldn't have been given a chance in the first place. Such a chronic condition should have disqualified her in the first place.