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Dusk_Writer


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It's been two years…

They thought that their friendship would last an eternity, but not all expectations are realities…

Cover art by me

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 8 )

Hmm... nope. I can't like this. Sure, it's written nicely, but I can't get over how contrived the plot is. Twilight simply "forgetting" her friendships? Nope, I don't buy it. Twilight is way out of character simply for the sake of plot convenience.

7156675 well, thank you for giving me your honest opinion. :twilightsmile:

I tried to keep Twilight in character but it's hard to since what I'm doing is literally not in her personality. I tried my best without changing the plot, but it wasn't working out. So I did what I could.

7156675 "Twilight is way out of character simply for the sake of plot convenience." So what?

wow!! you made that coverart yourself?!? looks very nice! and the story is good too!! :scootangel:

Im confused to how they would lose complete contact within two months but this is a nice story, I like the plot owo.

But seriously, I just cannot imagine Twilight doing this in the real show XD

7427559 Glad you enjoyed it!

A month may seem like a short amount of time but, a lot can happen in that time. As her royal life got busier, she accidentally cut all connections but was fully aware of it (if that makes sense.).

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