Love.
A thing that can be both beautiful and terrifying. For foals and adult ponies alike and even the latter struggle with its intricacies.
And it can be especially hard if it's first love. Having the first crush on another pony is a confusing thing for every filly or colt.
But this is not Clementine's problem. The problem she faces is far, far worse than that and it frightens her.
When a colt in her class suddenly shows strong affection for her, what is she going to do? How in the world should a timid, little filly like her handle such a situation?
Luckily, her dad has a solution for that.
An all OC fanfiction written to apply as a quest writer for Legends of Equestria.
The two characters are OC ponies from the game, Clementine and her dad Neigh Sayer, both living in Midway Village in the northern part of The Heartlands, a big wilderness area in the game. Full credit goes to the LoE developers.
This was a sweet story! Great job!
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Thanks!
Wow, hat was a terrific story! You really have a great way of telling stories centered around foals and the types of problems they encounter! I really enjoyed how Clementine's father took the time to just talk to her, despite how emotional she had been in the past. I think he realized that her problem was huge to her, even it was a small matter to him. He cared and helped her to work it out and understand. I'm going to favorite this and read it to my grand-daughters sometime, as there is a good lesson in this story.
Great job and good story! Your writing has really come a long way. Told you could do it! Congrats!
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You really think? I know I wrote about Shapy Cloud, who even has a very unusual problem for a filly her age, but maybe it's just coincidence so far that I nailed it so good.
Then again, this here is the fourth fanfiction I wrote that has a filly in the main role (with letting aside CMC fanfictions cause I know them very well, so writing for them is easy) and I did good so far, so maybe you're right. Hmm.....
He has it hard with her and she can be annoying and nerve-wrecking often. But he is her dad and he loves her, so he's biting through it.
That honors me, thanks. What lesson do you think that is?
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The lesson about not feeling pressured to go along with something that you are not comfortable with. Also, confronting this situation in a straight forward but with kindness and tact. If it becomes a problem, then don't be afraid to speak your mind and tell your true feelings.
As Clementine's father told her, if he cares about you he will understand your feelings. You might find that you feel the same in time or his feelings may change as well. Over all, you can still be friends as long as you respect each other.
Very wise and sage advice.
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Very good. Looks like there's a lot more meaning in this fic than I could see myself.