In his average day life turned upside down, will Nick be able to survive in this new world after his less then pleasent arrival? Or will his inexperience with other magic users and the strang mark on his hand be to much for him to handle?
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Great story. Will we see more of Bill later on?
Question, what the hell is a Tulpa? I mean like it seems this story has a lot of unusual elements about your protagonist with little to no explanation. Nick apparently has a familiar in the shape of Zangetsu, knows about Angels and Demons, could summon weaponry in his dreams, was unafraid of Bill, and is ruthless on hostage situation. Yet, no effort explains how the hell the guy became the way he is. I'll be honest the story is good, but try to explain why the guy behaves the way he does rather than make him one of the stereotypical ultra badass that is quick to adapt to the environment.
Another thing I forgot to add. How the hell did Nick, a guy who's probably on his 20s at most, developed enough lucid dreaming skills to trap Luna, a goddess that has dealt with nightmares and dreams for centuries? It's a good story, but the guy is becoming a Gary Stu. Also, you might need an editor as there are numerous spelling and grammatical errors
7253708 to answer your question a Tulsa is a sort of imaginary friend that if develops enough it will become sentient. It's a dream. He trained under bill whom is far better than luna in the dreamscape/mindscape rest will be explained tomorrow as my typing skills with a phone sucks.
7253567 maybe....
This is nice! I kinda hope he can patch things up with the ponies though.
please more this is amazingly funny
7253849 don't think i did not noticed you putting the song "make a man out of you" from the 1st mulan movie
More!
Meowre!!
7255457 maybe another time, I sorta have an editor, but last I checked he was busy with other stuff. send me a pm to contact you on Skype and we can talk.
7255927 when is de next chapter? I love this story
7255960 you love this story? you don't sound to sure when your asking if you do and the next chapter is being made right now, should be out in a couple of hours. hey, do you mind helping me with something?
is luna ok shes been in there for a months in his mind
7255992 it's in the next chapter, which should be out later tonight.
7255970 sure go ahead
7256022 so im adding my story to the human magic group into two folders. one is alchemy because, well... the source of all of his power is the PHILOSPHER'S STONE. but I haven't really been able to decide on what other folder I should put it in. after I post a couple more chapters do you think you could give me your opinion on which it should go in?
7256037 depends what is the other folder?
7256043 that's just it, it's alchemy and... I can't decide which else to put it in.
7256054 magic granted through dealings with magical beings, reason: he made a deal with bill cipher
Channelers, reason: he channels his magic from the Philosopher's stone
Artificially/accidentally gained magic, reason: same reason as channelers his magic is artificial
Ancient secrets and magical artifacts, reason: he used a magical artifact to gain magic
7256080 hmm, with that logic I think I'd go with the channalers. if he loses the stone then all his powers go away and he is stuck in his last form before losing it.
7256098 cool but i think u should put in the other folders too
7256111 the rules only allow me to put it into two, otherwise I would.
7256182 cool no biggie just cannot wait 4 de next chapter, now that i think about it, this is de 2nd story i have read dat involves familiars
Ha, poor Luna. I want to see when Nick has to fight the Princesses and their guards. I want to see him kick their asses.
Luna getting wrecked in the mindscape. One of my favorite clichés! Onwards!
7256526 I suppose I could let you edit it. but today is not a good time. tomorrow sound good?
7256545 Really the be a man song
7256545 How did I not get an alert about receiving a reply? ...Wait, I think I know. Your reply was on a different chapter than what I had written, causing me to not be alerted.
Let's, Steel Hands, daughter, you.
Also, really? The song from Mulan?
You sneaky sue!
Haha Mulan
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Kratos, she is not.
Celestia is probably rather mad at this point. I mean, it seems that Luna is trapped inside this cube for many months now. This could be rather problematic for him when they find him. And I have a feeling that this incoming fight might gain some attention and lead them directly to him. This certainly is going to be interesting!
MULAAAAAANNNNN!!!!
MUUUUUUUULLLLLLLLLLLLAAAAAAAAAANNNNNNNNN:)
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"Now i really wish I knew how to swim!"
"You must be as swift as the coursing river!"
"Enough of the song ,I literally can't swim!!!"
"Wait what?"
*gurgle*
[Minotaur running downriver after his student]"What the buck?!?!"
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he has gills though, so he wouldn't drown
The chapter was good, though, for future reference, incorporating lyrical songs into a story, especially Disney songs, is.....well......really cheesy and lame, to put it bluntly. Alongside that, it seemed like Nick already had enough strength to fight Steel Hands and win, if not through skill, then through overwhelming power. The same goes true for Iron, though, for him, I assume Nick was holding back his natural abilities for the sake of training.
Huh. I always aligned myself with fire.
Ok this chapter was full of mulan references
7266097
i like it