This story takes the oneshot of Crescent Pulsar's Pamphile and expands into how Twilight will deal with her broadening outlooks and revelations, becoming an alicorn, preparing to be a princess, and the implications of being the Sole Bearer of Harmony.
Twilight Sparkle was a humble unicorn, but between her defeat of Nightmare Moon, wielding the Elements alone, and ascending all in one night? The world will come to revere her for her growing abilities, her increasing deeds, and her virtue as a Pamphile, intending to be a Friend to all beings. There will be bumps, conflicts, and challenges along the way, but Twilight never was one to shy from tests.
But the question grows, how will the Alicorn of Harmony fair as a Defender and Future Princess of Equestria? Either way, one thing is certain.
There certainly hasn't seen one quite like her before.
AN First chapter picks up immediately after the original Pamphile. I WAS going to be Pulsar's chapter- with his permission and at his suggestion- but for some reason, this site refuses to allow you to use another author's piece as an opening bit, even with their expressed permission.
7/28/16: Somehow, this got featured just by updating it. Sweet. Which lasted all of five minutes.
DUDE!!!! was going to put this in my tracking list....BUT that ending tho, changed everything... good stuff bro, good stuff!
pd: nearly died with all the jokes here
Ha ha ha ha
OK I about choked with laphter at the end. I have a very good feeling about this fanfiction and I will be waiting patiently for the next chapter. Awsome work there
Hay my mom said the same thing when I saved the world!
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Hey there. I have to admit this story has potential. I really appreciate you going to the effort. VERY good job on the exchanges, emotional content and future chapter set-up in all the right places. Hey, maybe "Amending Fences" could happen here MUCH sooner than in canon (i.e. Twi returns to Canterlot long enough to pack a few prized belongings for her move to Ponyville and explain things in pony to her parents and big brother, only to somehow realize how badly she unintentionally hurt Moondancer and set out to fix things). Of course, if you DON'T like the idea, I profusely apologize for wasting your time and still look forward to more of this as soon as time and inspiration will allow.
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Perfect timing.
Actually, I had that thought like....ten minutes before you posted this.
7234782 Thanks very much. :-D
I love this concept so much
just read Pamphile, and this is already looking to be such a great continuation
As I said on fanfiction awesome story.
Though it seem's you've put chapter 2 before the first by accident.
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No, the first chapter wasn't mine- this whole thing is a continuation of a oneshot- and this site doesn't let any repeat chapters get posted for any reason, unless it has significant changes.
promising first chapter, looking forward to many more.
You're issue is with the following rules:
Don’t Post (Content):
* Stories that plagiarize other stories. This means intentionally copying another author’s words and presenting them as your own.
* Stories you did not write. If you are not the original author or a co-author, you cannot post it, even with permission. This includes “novelizing” a comic, movie, game, etc. that you did not create. For example: a Halo crossover with the same plot, scenes, dialogue, etc. but with the characters replaced by ponies.
This Kate has really wacky rules. (But it's still more organized than fanfiction.net)
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Yeah, I'm aware of those rules. Doesn't make any less weird that you can't repost a story with an author's permission. And FF never came off as unorganized to me personally- for the most part.
Well I'm definitely wanting more of this!
Also I hope we see a lot more of Luna in this than the show gave us!
Please tell me there is more!
Oh god, I nearly died of laughter at the end! Iron ovaries, the balls of steel for women!
Great chapter. Wonder if rainbow is going to teachh twilight to fly. They can learn the rainbow at the same time. When Rainbow learns how to do it on command. Wonder how Twilight being an Alicorn will change things the ursa minor will be a lot easier. And Sue will be more accepting of Zecora immediately. Looking forward to the next chapter. Also loved the last sentence.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter! I just love this idea so much!
I love this so funny can't wait for more
Yay new chapter!
I can't wait for the next one!
I like the comedic direction you seem to be taking.
There're a few instances where you've written 'gap' where I think you meant 'gape'.
Fridge horror!
Welp, if poor Twi didn't have a shy bladder before...
Another delightful chapter that's left me grinning like a dork.
Nice long chapter, but the wait was a bit long... Still love this story so keep up the good work!
A chapter well worth the wait!
Hey there. Thanks greatly for getting this next chapter up. I really appreciate you going to the effort. Once again, splendid job on the exchanges, emotional content, humor and future chapter set-up in all the right places. :-D I'll definitely be looking forward to more of this as soon as time and inspiration will allow.
Loved it.
Glad to see more of this! Worth the wait because it meant I reread the previous content and got to enjoy it all over again
OH YAY! More, huzzah!
Can't wait for more chapters
More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I love it!!!!!!!
MORE PLEASE!
Cant wait to see more my friend! We all believe its good, so good only one person disliked it! (Although i think they clicked that on accident.)
I like your story. I also like how sweet and innocent Twilight is that she does not understand what Luna meant by the old reward for rescuing a maiden. I just wonder if there will be some romance between Luna and Twilight since I can actually see that happening but I think it will be begin slowly since the greatest and strongest type of love is when a person takes time to get to know the other. Besides that since this is a little different I can actually see Twilight really be a knight even if her title is Lady of the Realm.
Well, considering that Twilight has fully accepted that she needs to embrace friendship, perhaps we'll see her touching base with her study group, Moondancer, Minuette, Twinkleshine, and Lemon Hearts (I believe Lyra Heartstrings is already in Ponyville by this point, but if not, then her too)? I mean, Twilight does kind of owe Moondancer an apology and an explanation for why she missed her party...
And getting it before Twilight goes back to Ponyville, rather than waiting over a year and doing it only after Spike reminds Twilight about her friends back in Canterlot, will be much better received by Moondancer.
Those last few lines. Golden.
Looooove it! Hopefully we dont have to wait that long for the next chapter ;) Not like im one to talk! Wonderfull as always my freind!
So...
Alicorn of Harmony, huh?
With the legend that's cropping up behind Twilight Sparkle (just from her own unexaggerated actions and the events surrounding her), chances are that she's going to end up with a guard detail assigned to her service even if she's just a Lady of the Realm and not actually a Princess yet.
At the very least, Celestia is probably going to set the Royal Guard to prepare for her sister's Night Guard to be restored, with the possibility of having a Dawn Guard and Dusk Guard for Cadence and Twilight respectively (just to fit them into the emerging pattern).
And then we can have the Party Guard, the Pizza Guard, the Cake Guard, and the Guard Guard!
Pinkie...
So many innuendos.... I LOVE IT!
LOL, employers know to exit when the employees start comparing their salaries
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That is all.
P.S. why there no Luna emotes?!
Not much I can say other than, once again, excellent job on the exchanges, emotional content, humor and future chapter set-up in all the right places. I particularly liked Spike's scene at the palace, Velvet's reactions to - certain details - and the scene with Twi and Moondancer. :-D This chapter may have taken a while, but was WELL worth the wait. :-D I'll definitely be looking forward to more of this as soon as time and inspiration will allow.
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I love it! (That gif I can't be bothered to dig up on mobile)
Side note; while I'm a bit late to say this, I'm dissapointed that the first story didn't end on Celestia saying "wait there were supposed to be 6 of you."
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If I had written the first chapter(AK the original oneshot) I would have been very tempted to do that.
And you could have, too, if not for the odd policy this place has.
The thought also crossed my mind early on, but I figured that would only happen if fate/destiny worked in more absolute terms and Celestia could perceive it to some extent, and that assumed too much for my liking. And there's the thing about not needing a separate user for each element in the past, so...
And, man, Akuma, it's no wonder this story doesn't update often: you start more stories than I do.
Yes, that's a subtle hint that I'm enjoying it. The story, not the wait.
Is this going to be a Twilight/Moondancer fic here?
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It'll be a long time, if ever, before Twilight gets paired with anyone here. But that doesn't mean she won't have admirers of varying types.
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I thought the same thing
7241575 well then there's alot of people breaking this rule cause I've Eads entire story's where they do.
Also is this a site rule cause if so that's just stupid cause you can do whatever you want to a story if given permission by the people who own it.