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SusieBeeca


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This story is a sequel to Little Bea


Pregnancy can take a toll on any mare, but it seems to be hitting Trixie harder than most. Flam, for his part, couldn't be happier (even if the little bundle of joy was unplanned) and he's been bending over backwards to jolly her along. But he's getting the nagging feeling there's something she's not telling him.

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Without having read the story... The foal's striped, isn't it?

An odd ship, but a good story. Nice work. :moustache:

Aw:fluttershysad:! Though I don't understand it from not reading the other story, this is sweet and upsetting.

Yeah, without having me read the main story I can't understand the ending. Sorry.

I am so confused...:applejackconfused:

In the other stories , Trixie's dad was an earth pony...and he abused her. Badly.

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It was a pretty big derp on my part to forget to label this as a sequel to a 2601-word one-shot which would a) hopefully help explain this a bit better and b) prevent people from having to read a multi-chapter, M-rated story. Oh well, what can I say? I uploaded this after getting no sleep. Next time I'll try to remember important things like that!

I hope there is more to be said on this. I know this is a ship you've worked well on in incorporating into your largest body of work. Very nice flow in the piece. I hope this ship's voyage goes on a bit longer.

Oh ho ho! No wonder Trixie looks huge if she has twins. Yeah, future troubles are coming. I could see Trixie learning to love an earth pony foal on its own, but Trixie giving equal care and attention to a unicorn and earth pony twin siblings? That's going to be real tricky, especially if the earth pony is a colt.

7253757 I concur totally with that statement. There is certainly potential for interesting family and story dynamics from that possibility. More so if a continuation were to include Uncle Flim, Aunt Jackie, and cousin Hesperides from Three Steps Back.

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especially if the earth pony is a colt.

Ooh, you are wicked! Planting ideas in my head!

More please!!!!

We need a story about this two and their babies. I loved AJ and Film story and would love to have something similar to that.

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Aw, thank you! That's so sweet :heart: I haven't been writing pony stuff lately since I haven't yet seen the new episodes, but after I get caught up I might do a "next gen" fic with the cousins.

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That would be so awesome!:rainbowkiss:

Gonna just chime in my deepest appreciation for these stories, and I hope more comes of it one day.

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