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Cardinal Dan Productions


I love to write, I love to read, and I love this community! If there's a story I want to read that doesn't exist yet, I'll write it myself.

Comments ( 28 )

This is so hawt that you can make sahara dessert put to shame amazing clop i ever read and gud luck for your other fics :pinkiehappy:

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Great story. It was a bit rushed but i can manage. Still hoping this would turn into a two-shot though. :twilightsheepish:

Woah, Waffen, I didn't even know that you made this. I've GOT to read this and then your sequel!

After reading:

Damn! That was hot as fuck! Definitely going into my clop folder. :>

That just leaves with Applejack and Pinkie Pie.

Okey this was definitly hot.

Second read. Still hot. :pinkiesmile:

good story, I like it a lot now to go to the bathroom

Not what I was expecting, but holy ship, that was not unwelcome.

As hot and sexy this was :ajsmug:
I realy wanted to see that the Apple sisters geting the "usual" :trollestia:

Isn’t this the exact same chapter as the last one?

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The start and end are the same, but the middle focuses on Applejack's "treatment", not Applebloom's.

Have Aloe and Lotus ever been massaged by a dragon?

Not that I particularly mind, bit shouldn't this have a mature tag?

Loved it. And glad to see a proper end . I don't mind the waiting (totally a lie) and Aj's shower treat was enjoyable.
But as a previous review from Hazy Answer noted. "Shouldn't this have a M tag?" And I agree with him.
We don't mind it, but it should be rated Mature.

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You’re absolutely right. It was previously rated M for Mature, but I thought I’d change it to see if the Moderator Overlords would let me get away with it. The story has been re-rated.

It lives! Can't wait for the next chapter.:pinkiehappy:

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I didn’t plan on a Pinkie Pie chapter. If you want one, I can see about making one in the near future.

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Man, that was years ago. Sorry, I guess I just forgot about this story. I’ve been on a break from writing to work.

Pretty good story…

But come on… You know you don’t have to start a new paragraph for every single sentence, right?

This chapter alone has impressed me a ton. I could feel the moment with the three and made me wish so badly I could be in Twilight's situation.

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