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Brave Story: Revival - EternallyLost



A single magic stone leads to the revival of six forgotten heroes from the darkest age of equestrian history. From a world at war to an age of peace these ancient warriors learn to live in a familiar yet very different world.

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Ending the Stalemate

For the first time in over a millennia, The magic of Harmony began to gather in the depths of the underworld...

In sequence the necklaces began to glow brightly raising the ponies from the floor, Twilight's own tiara began to glow brightly. At once all six mares opened their eyes unleashing the awesome power of the elements of harmony. The lights shot upward curving back down into a rainbow that wrapped around the statues erupting into a rainbow tornado that shot right back up to the ceiling, smaller debris getting pushed aside as it spun tightly around the stone figures infusing them with energy. It only lasted a few moments before the tornado died away. The element wielders landing once more on the floor, a little shaky.

All at once the stone faded away, color returning to the former statues in a sudden rush. A collection of gasps and coughs echoed through the ruins, the six ponies taking their first breath in ages. Swords clattered to the floor, mixing with the rattle of bones as the monstrous alicorn began to move.

"Free..." a dark voice hissed from the skeletal monstrosity, curious yet elated.

"Did... did the ritual fail?" the male earth pony spoke staring up to the monster weak but unflinching, his soft tone carrying a quiet strength. The moment of quiet was cut by the ringing of powerful magic as both princesses set to bind the skeletal alicorn in place getting a low growl of surprise. It's red eyes flashed with anger.

"You..." it hissed struggling against the power bind. "Erg, Usurpers! Unhand me!" it's horn crackled with energy but it was suppressed by a concerted effort from Celestia.

"We have Ajora contained for the moment," The sun princess grunted keeping her focus on the thrashing beast, matching her own magic flares to counter Ajora's attempts to free itself.

"Make Haste friends and retrieve the others, I am uncertain how long we can hold this beast." Luna commanded glaring hotly at the alicorn in question, the elements immediately snapping to attention and rushing forward to help the recently revived.

"Is that... little Lulu?" Muttered the female earth pony staring wide at the moon princess.

"Up and at'em sugercube, we need to get you out of here." Applejack's voice seemed to break her from her chance, the farmer bent low and pulled one of the mare's forelegs over her shoulder slowly helping her to her hooves.

"Y-Yes, of course... Thank you." the well dressed mare did her best to hobble away from the magical tug of war but her eyes kept wandering back to the two princesses, confusion marring her features. Her male counterpart waved away the assistance, insisting the others needed the help more. It took him a moment to steady himself but he managed to stumble along behind Applejack.

The elder pegasus had somehow managed to re-sheath his massive blade by the time the girls reached him. As sturdy as he seemed to be the moment he tried to take a step he faltered, caught by pair of warm bodies on either side of him, a cyan wing over top his back to help stead him.

"Careful! You're too wibbly wobbly to be walking on you own." Pinkie chided cheerfully.

"Yeah, just take it slow and we'll get you out of here." Dash assured him, guiding them away.

"Well, I'm not one to argue with pretty mares." he said with a jovial, if weak, chuckle. Pinkie's bubbly giggle joined in a moment later while Dash rolled her eyes.

"Just keep your hooves where they belong old man." her rebuttal only brought a larger bout of laughter from the stallion. His unicorn companion looked onto the bound Ajora with the slightest of smiles.

"Perhaps there are yet gods that still listen..."

"Um Miss? It's really not safe over here." Fluttershy's muttered tone was barely audible of the evil sorcerers struggles. The unicorn looked over to the pegasus, causing her to flinch.

"What did you sa-" she paused eyes focusing on the element of kindness. "Is that..." she reached out a hoof immediately began to lose her balance. But Fluttershy was there to catch the warrior supportive despite her soft voice.

"Careful, you've been asleep for a long time. This way." she began to gently urge the unicorn forward, to which she complied, leaving her sword stuck upright in the stone, her horn not responding her her command to retrieve it.

"I am unused to such weakness...my Apologies Miss,"

"Fluttershy. No worries, a short rest and you'll be fine" she assured her charge and they slowly slipped away from the danger zone.

Rarity and Twilight approached the final two, the female unicorn glaring hotly at the trapped monster, while her male companion was seemingly doing everything in his power just to remain upright.

"Fire and Brimstone! Never again will I have a more open strike on the beast and my damn horn refuses to respond." She growled in a harsh tone. Biting onto the hilt of her massive blade she seemed to want to take matters in a more physical direction.

"Now Melody, you know that blade wasn't made for mouth wielding."

"dhis iz our besfth chanth!" She insisted, mouth still around the hilt. She groaned loudly trying(unsuccessfully) to lift the blade from it's furrow in the stone floor. A Purple aura surrounded unicorn and blade lifting them clear from the ground. 'Melody' spat the hilt free in surprise "What in blazes?"

"That won't be necessary." Twilight explained calmly, "We'll be handling it from here."

"Yes dear, you've done more then your fair share." Rarity chimed in offering the stallion a reassuring smile. He returned it before uttering an explosive sigh of relief.

"Oh thank goodness. I have had MORE then enough war and demons for one lifetime."

"Your in luck darling, we're fresh out of both at the moment." she carefully helped him from the field while his female companion did her best warrior's pout in Twilight's aura.

Ajora looked frantically from side to side, desperately trying to make sense of the myriad events happening at once. Insight flashed in his glowing eyes and his struggles ceased. Both princesses held their bindings firm watching the skeletal alicorn carefully for any sign of resistance.

"It seems it hath been some time since we last met welps," the chattering of bones was eerily off sink with it's deep, malevolent voice. "You have grown." he stated firmly, the last syllable trailing through the stale air. Neither Luna nor Celestia responded. The skeleton clenched it's jaw in annoyance. Turning it's gaze to the ponies slowly leaving the battle site. "I see you have a new batch followers and yet you returned... nostalgic for your old toys Child?" he hissed, enjoying the tightening of Celestia's shoulders.

"You leave the princesses alone ya bag of bones!" Dash shook a hoof before she was quieted by her friends.

"Royalty?" Ajora raised a bony brow. "My my... Perhaps we are not so different after all..."

"We are nothing like you!" Luna exclaimed with a grimace

"Luna." Celestia's voice was firm, if a bit strained. The moon princess regained her composure bring her face to a neutral mask once more. At that the beast began to laugh, sending a cold chill down the spines of all ponies present. The only one unphased the the male earth pony who took a step forward glaring defiantly before he was urged back. "Girls," Celestia began. "Get ready." The elements of harmony stepped forward, preparing to gather the powers of their artifacts once more.

Ajora's bony form creaked audibly trying to step away from the semi-circle of mares but the princess magic held it firm. "Such a short reunion and you already wish it over." The beast rumbled strangely calm. "Such poor hostesses. Very well I shall let myself out then." it added with a malicious grin.

"You are going nowhere Ajora." Celestia's voice thundered as her magic held strong. "Girls."

"Yes Princess." Twilight nodded to her friends and they begin to focus, their elements filling with the powers of harmony once more. Ajora merely grinned, it's glowing eyes flashing brightly, several claws bursting up from the ground below. The clawed fro purchase and began to pulled creatures of a sickly green pallor began to pull themselves from the ground.

"Demons!" The earth stallion tried to move forward but stumbled, limbs still numb. "Curse this weakness..." The braided unicorn rested a hoof on his shoulder, eyes forward as the elements reached full power. "Sterling?"

"Kite, you have nothing to fear. Those mares wield the harmonic auracite." she gained a grim smile. "Ajora's struggles are for naught." The six ancient warriors watched as a rainbow beam cascaded from the floating mares passing through the risen demons and scattering their dust to the wind.

"What?! such power!" Ajora's eyes widened in fear it's horn lighting up before being engulfed in a tornado of color and magic. "Not again! NOOOOOooooooo..." As soon as it started the magical onslaught had ended, a cloud of old dust and dispelled demons hung in the air obscuring the results of the impressive display.

"Is it truly over?" The earth pony mare asked softly clutching her tattered dress between her forehooves. The dust parted to reveal an odd site. Instead of grotesque skeletal statue there was... nothing. Merely dust and echos.

"Where'd old bony go?" Rainbow dash looked around confused.

"Did we send it to that moon?" Pinkie asked cocking her head, Luna frowned.

"No, Ajora's foul presence has not touched the moon... but it is gone." the moon princess finished with certainty.

"Ajora is no more..." Celestia gave a relieved sigh before looking to friends, old and new, and smiled. The ancient warriors visibly relaxed while Twilight and her friends exchanged smiles.

"Hmph, That was certainly a lot more flashy then I remember." The elder pegasus commented with a wry smile. "Admittedly with more of... feminine touch."

"Say what you will Cirrus but I would gladly have worn the most frilly of dress saddles if our battles would have been but a fraction less life threatening." The unarmored unicorn muttered watching the display in awe getting a laugh from the older stallion along with some of the others. His female companion on the other hoof snorted, hoof resting on her massive blade.

"You are hardly an ambassador of stallionhood as it stands Flintlock. I see not how a few frills would make a difference."

"Words as sharp as your blade, yet I seem to detect a bit of jealousy in your voice. Watching our mighty foe defeated with such ease..." he offered with a small grin as Melody snorted saying nothing in reply, eyes turning away from the new barers. An awkward silence slowly settled in with the reality of the current situation. Element barers, old and new, looked across to each other unsure what to do. Even Celestia, for which this day couldn't have gone any better, was at a lost. Fortunately her sister was not one to let silence reign.

"Some introduction are due, but mayhaps it best to save those until we hath left this foul place."

"Yes, I think we have spent more then enough time in Tartarus."

"You don't gotta tell me twice." Applejack chimed in, clearly relieved their trek into the underworld was at it's end.

"Yes," 'Kite' agreed. "The atmosphere is not exactly ideal for friendly tidings." he looked back to his companions. "Is everypony able enough for travel?" a wave of confirmation came from the warriors, only the earth pony mare seemed unsure.

"But brother, what about Eight?" she asked softly turning her gaze to the depowered automation. "We can't just leave him here..."

"Him?" Twilight muttered confused. A brilliant yellow aura lifting the pony shaped heap of metal from the ground ended any possible debate.

"No worries Serenade, it would hardly be fair to leave such a loyal guardian behind after all his hard work." Celestia smiled, horn glowing softly in the dim light.

"Thank you Celly. You really have grown so much." The dress clad mare said with a soft smile. "In more then just the obvious ways." her hoof masking a dainty giggle.

"Yes... It's been a very long time..." Celestia's smile was a little forced, 'Serenade' nodded returning a small sad smile.

"I'm beginning to get that feeling."

Author's Note:

The curse is broken and Ancient warriors revived.

I'm really looking forward to exploring the tactics ponies but I still have to work my way through this beginning bit. Again, I'm happy with the 6 I chose to use but am a little sad I couldn't include some of the lesser characters. But a lot for that comes from my fanboyness for FFT.

I know it's not too much but next time we will a lot of character interaction as elements new and old get to sit down and have a chat (with a bit of princess as well).

Comments ( 10 )

Interesting. I may be jumping the gun but I wonder if you are going to write a story about the Vagrant next?
Or would Ashley be in Equestria's far future?

7298967 I unfortunately haven't played Vagrant Story. Rented it a few time back in the day but just never stuck with me. Someday would like to play it but yeah sorry :twilightsheepish:

7280120 Looking forword to this, intend to start readin soon. While FFVI is my fave RPG of all time The lower spots keep it in good company such as FF Tactics. so seeing a pony fic about it is a surprise and a pleseant one at that!

As for Ramza being a jack of all trades, it's true, but honestly I tend to make him either a monk or Lancer ( baring the final fight with a certain Night at the end of chapter two (Seriously that fight can kiss it!) But yeah Ramza's one of the few who can give Twilight a run for her money in being a posscible Mary Sue. Though what really has me worried about weather or Not Equestria will be left Standing is that T.G. Cid is apparently in this fic. Love the guy but he basically slaps gameplay balance across the face and make it go sit in a corner and wear a dunce cap. Though give what his newphew showed himself capable of doing... I really shouldn't be surprised that T.G. cid is a force to be reckoned with.

Speaking of game breaking though, I wonder how much seeing the "Galaxy Stop" spell would make twilight geek out. Better yet seeing a calculator in action. Heh, got to love those guys, Terik wouldn't know what to do with them.

Well, some grammar/spelling issues aside, this is turning out to be a fun little mash-up. So, it seems we have Ramza, Alma, T.G. Cid, Agrias, Meliadoul, and Mustadio as the final group to face down Ajora (Ultima) in the Airship Graveyard. Now, they're awake in modern Equestria after a thousand-year-plus stone nap. Call me paranoid, but Final Fantasy villains that are 'only' Petrified for thousands of years tend to not go away as easily as depicted in this chapter. I doubt that's the last we'll see of the alicorn High Seraph before this is through. Or his (her) buddies...

Call me strange, but I actually never really use the named characters throughout most of FFT. I enjoyed getting two generic males and two generic females, and make one of each into a melee and mage character, and having them, alongside Ramza, as my only team. Being able to have a team specifically tailored for full positive Zodiac interactions and solid Brave/Faith scores for intended roles can really make a strong team. Especially in the War of the Lions version with the new jobs.

You thought T.G. Cid was broken? Let me introduce you to the Dark Knight...

7299233 Monk Ramza is pretty popular choice (done it several times myself) but perhaps do you playing way too much of tactics I've tried a lot of other options. Challenge runs and such :)

As for Cid heh, yeah he is easy mode generally speaking. But having that much power in such an easy going character makes for some interesting interactions. he's that kind of old warrior who would enjoy a peaceful age... and perhaps be looking for an apprentice :trollestia: we'll see...

as for calculators, I always saw them 'mad men'. I imagine them talking about lvls, experience, brave ratings and such while their companions look on worried. You can basically see the matrix :p I may bring it up in a non-canon goof story but not in the main plot.

7299531 It's not strange, some of my favorite groups had couple of generics to roll along with the crew... Though I always used Mustadio and Agrias. Occasionally Rafa. I tended more toward 'thematic' generics or bit of personal rp with how they developed... archer thieves, chemist mediators, red chocobos, long range Break Skills... etc etc. I leave the min maxing to my friend Prospeio (who is my main idea guy).

As for Ajora welllll.... :pinkiehappy:

7299885 I'm liking things so far wondering something about how Luna seemed to focus on Ramza more then the others but without proof my theory about that is just that.

"I've played the game through a few times, but I'm ot very good with it's mechanics. much as I love the battle system and all you can do with the jobs, I'm not the best tactition. Hell I'll admit that I tend to use level grinding as my silver hammer for problem solving. Much to my shame when I beat the game the first time through my party was in the seventies. Like I said, not the best tactition, though I'm stubborn as hell.

Witch only seems to give me grief with the battles at the end of chapter two. screw Weigif and his bullshit, and screw the battle on the roof thrice over!

Fair point about Cid, I can see him getting along with big Mac fairly well. Him taking on an apprentice is an interesting thought and amusing too. Though what I think would be more amusing would be say something like a hydra starts causing trouble near ponyville, Cid's gearing up to bust heads... and fluttershy convinces it to leave peacefully, dumbfounded blinks from the FFT crew, then after processing it for a bit Cid busts a gut laughing and either makes refrence to Beuowolf, or wishes they had someone like Fluttershy around during the Tribe war, either to negotiate peace, or to "Tll the fools off like their mothers never did when they were children!"

The calculaters may be "Mad" but their methods "work" so thus that makes them all the more amusing. After all is it really "madness' if what they say is right? Or do they just have an awareness that others don't... And now I've likened them to Pinkie, witch gives me the horrifying thought of her being a calculator. Probly been reading too much of Dexter's Lab Equestria lately, but well the last chapter of "Nightmare Trip" is way too awesome for it's own good.

7300540 Hey, I give no judging on playstayles. If you cared enough to power through it to beat the game and see the ending doesn't matter how to me. I fell into the weigraf trap & Riovanes Roof 'speed check' like everyone else first time through. Had to completely restart my game since I had no previous save. Eventually had to get into habits of specifically playing certain ways for those battles and then going back to my preferred styles afterward.

Hell I know I'm an odd duck out because my favorite class is Mediator. :derpytongue2:

I do plan on having fun with the 'culture shock' for the tactics crew. Stances on Violence, modesty/clothing, and general "progress" should be fun. Some will adapt easier then others of course. As for Luna it will come to pass, the princess' history will be revealed in time and thus their connections to the tactics group. It'll be a bit, but looking forward to it

7300653 Weigraf honestly wouldn't be so bad if he and his flunkies didn't have those damn summons. Honestly the attack they have, along with them being HP walls is more then enough. still that fight gives me a love of the 'Yell" skill I don't spam it much outside that fight but it still gets plenty of use. And the speed check, is just so irritating, though stripping someone nude, and keeping them fairly close to a chemist so that they can have phenix down lobbed at them helps a good deal.

On a different not, one of my favorite fights in the game is putting and end to a certain dark night, It feels rather cathartic to end him, especially as the two most aggravating backstabbers in the game don't get proper comuppence if you ask me. (Deleta's too sympathetic for his to feel satisfying enough even though he's still a horrible person.) Another fun fight is the one at the sluice gate, drowning armies for fun and profit!

The fish out of water thing is great for comedy, drama, or even adventure, Futurama shows us that. As does Samurai Jack. Can't wait to see the story continue.

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