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Spike has grown older and more independent and soon enough he lands a job at PonyVille hospital as an assistant to Nurse Redheart. It starts out all fine and dandy until Redheart develops feelings for the small drake. And just as she decides to tell him disaster strikes
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Good story so far
keep it up
A bit out of left field, but...
Rarity friendzoned Spike--and one of the reasons is that HE'S TOO YOUNG?! And in the same way, Redheart has a crush (and probably more
), and I'm pretty sure that Redheart and Rarity would be roughly comparably similar ages if Redheart is actually older...I smell a generous hypocrite...
The other reasons I can understand, just the rejection by age bristles me a bit. That makes Rarity really look like a bitch...but then again this story is not about her, it it about the growing relationship between Spike and Nurse Redheart. It's just that I had to comment on that particular point.''
Also, be a bit original for Spike's would-be assassin/culprit. Blueblood as a villian is kinda old. I am looking forward to who had the straight-up stones to not just assault Spike, but apparently attempt to kill him. I assume that the culprit may know that Spike pretty damn connected and that would be a major reason for the attempted assassination, or could just be wanting to slay a dragon (I'm pretty sure Celestia outlawed that if it hasn't been done already).
Oh no In my mind Blueblood would accept Spike being in the royal family even going as far as to shape him in his image. And about a Rarity looking like a bitch. It's my way of showing that I don't like RariSpike!!!
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Well, now that's known, I would be pretty sure that Blueblood would be a just a might...annoyed (that's an understatement) that his own cousin was targeted...I really want to see how he's handling it--who knows, maybe he's like Shining Armor. nopony messes with family, even if he has scales..
Here's the thing though in this story only Celestia thinks of a Spike like family so Blueblood even Luna wouldn't have taken that action
In this story he's considered part of the Sparkle family
New chapter yay
This story is eerily similar to one I just started to write.
7357547 I'd say it makes Rarity look shallow more then anything else. Basically it say's she cares more about others thinking bad of her for dating someone younger then her then about how Spike feels about her.
The story is interesting and has potential. I'll admit from the description I expected Spike to come to down with a rare heart disease, not be attacked. I do have to wonder how anyone could even do that much damage to him considering dragons are supposed to be built like tanks.
The biggest problem with the story is the pacing. The story moves and break neck speed from scene to scene without really giving much time to breath. And is a story about tragedy and someone knocking at death door it is very important characters be given a change to breath.
I don't if ultimately Derpy has a real shot, but regardless of what happens with her going forward...Derpy, you are THE MAN!!!! Or MARE, considering Derpy is female!!! There's a reason why she considered probably the best mailmare in Ponyville at least, even when she makes mistakes--unlike others, I'm pretty sure she owns up for her mistakes and tries to make things right.
Thank you and I'll let you all know that the next chapter is being worked on I've just got writers block so if you have any ideas please share them.
Continue? Or forgotten?
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I've been meaning to revamp both my stories but finals are tomorrow and I'm just gonna wait till summer break officially starts
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ahh ok, i know how that is, good luck
Continuing Soon Or Abandoned?
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My question as well