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The Limping Colt

The Limping Colt.

A bar. Sells booze. Gives some temporary comfort.

The following eavesdrops, much like the ponies in the Colt, are likely out of order and well-meaning.

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Nimnul

Nimnul #1 · Jun 22nd, 2016 · · ·

I liked it. Berry quitting smoking because of Dinky was a cute touch.

SomeTeeth

SomeTeeth #2 · Jun 22nd, 2016 · · ·

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Hey cheers dude! Initially the bits were mostly gloomy so I wanted to get some balance.

sevenofeleven

sevenofeleven #3 · Jun 24th, 2016 · · ·

Kudos on the dialog.

SomeTeeth

SomeTeeth #4 · Jun 26th, 2016 · · ·

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Cheers! Probably fucked some grammar rules in the process, but the point was to try and get better by doing it.

Luna Aeterna Solutae

Luna Aeterna Solutae #5 · Jul 11th, 2016 · · ·

7340525 When writing dialogue, all the rules go out the window.
Also I wouldn't have any hope of anything useful coming out of those groups.

SomeTeeth

SomeTeeth #6 · Jul 13th, 2016 · · ·

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I liked doing the dialogue cause of that, but it's a bit daunting going more freeform as I'm going with no editor but me. So if I don't spot it then, well, shit. Also, yeah I got the feeling they'd be a bit lost in the crowd, but it can't hurt right?

Luna Aeterna Solutae