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The First Hunter


Tonight, Gerhman joins the hunt.

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Princess Twilight Sparkle went to bed one ordinary Ponyville night.

She woke up in the barren desert of Saddle Arabia, with no idea how she got there.

Twilight Sparkle lost the war with the sun. But once she is saved from the brink of death, she is caught up in an entirely different war more ancient than the princesses themselves, and one where picking a side is not quite as easy as it seems...

It's good she'll have a friend.


Rated T for fantasy violence and sexual references.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 20 )

Interesting...

Interesting

Oh, this is a great setup. Looking forward to the next chapter! :pinkiehappy:

Keep going, I'm interested.

Tracking...

Some court sorcerer can bring her into the desert from a distance and unwillingly, but the princess of magic can't get back home via teleport??? Surely she could at least use magic to better survive the heat, and she has wings to at least get out faster physically too.

Very interesting starter, definitely tracking, but Twilight battled with the heat in a desert for 6 hours after she was worn out by farm work? Seems Twilight has been eating her greens since the season 5 finale where she got tired from fighting Starlight rather quickly.:twilightsheepish:

7969477 magic is sometimes much more draining then physical work

Hmm... another story with potential, unfinished.

Why End On A Clifhanger?!:pinkiesad2:
This story is really good.
Please MOAR.

Now this is a rare story to find, I really hope twilight will be alright, and what did the guard's find in the desert, hope it is twilight are some of hers ether way I look forward to ch2 and others storys you make

Not sure what category to put this onder so I say top25

Looks like fictional characters aren't the only ones that can be brought back from the dead!
Really interested in Twilight getting to choose the next Queen, I hope it will be a very stressful task.
This king is a bit mad to ask Twilight to be 'The Queen of Sand'. She's already has a castle in a small town that has a mayor, why ruin that life of not so many responsibilities.
Can't wait for the next chapter! See you in two years!:pinkiecrazy:

Huzzah, it continues! That certainly is an awkward way to induct someone into your national succession... :rainbowlaugh:

Why do I get the feeling that this momentary interruption of Twilight service is going to cause problems? :pinkiecrazy:

Hello, Just checking in with your wonderful story.

Thus, like its subject, the tale returns to the land of the living. Such suspense! Will Rainbow truly have the stamina to go the distance? Will the author? Stay tuned!

Good to see this isn't dead.

and she felt Amira's presence loom over me as I responded.

she closed my eyes and gave off a long sigh.

A couple accidental perspective shifts, there. :twilightsmile:

Ah, good, the most level-headed of Twilight's friends is coming to help! :rainbowlaugh:

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Fixed. Thanks for the catch.

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