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A Kings Castle

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Moongaze14

Moongaze14 #1 · Jul 2nd, 2016 · · ·

Okay, this story seems interesting. Gotta say that it was interesting to see Sombra interview the different mares who came to have the maid position. Also, it's refreshing to see Fluttershy openly checking out Sombra as opposed to other fics where she is too timid to check a stallion out. Have a fav.

The Ascendent

The Ascendent #2 · Jul 2nd, 2016 · · ·

Interesting premise. So Sombra has retired and looking for a maid to mind his estate. Good start.

KingJoltik

KingJoltik #3 · Jul 2nd, 2016 · · ·

There's a few grammar errors here and there but...this could be a good start. The next few chapters will probably determine everything though. Otherwise, this is really good.

Pause

Pause #4 · Jul 3rd, 2016 · · ·

Human tag is unnecessary. Anthro is enough.

_-PRINCE ASTAROT-_

_-PRINCE ASTAROT-_ #5 · Jul 3rd, 2016 · · ·

Its so interesting and i love Sombrashy too XD im so exited to read more from this eheheheh its prety rare to read up Sombrashy on Mlp since not much of the writers made this its soooo awesome XD!!!!!

danail24

danail24 #6 · Jul 10th, 2016 · · ·

Not bad of a story. It's got potential. Also you have my attention. I mean grammatically speaking, you need some work. A proof reader if you will. I could edit your story a little if you would let me. Give me a reply if you're interested.