Twilight leaned over in her throne, her brows raised in wonder.
"So, you're from the human world, but not this human world?"
Pinkie piped up from besides me.
"Yep!"
Twilight frowned.
"Well, I'd better send you back. Who knows what trouble could happen?"
Pinkie raised a hoof
"He might end up staying here forever, causing grief over his loss in his home world, and that grief could escalate to conflict, and then war!"
"...Ooookaaay?"
Twilight waved off Pinkie.
"But either way, he needs to go."
"But-but--"
Pinkie. You're already in Equestria anyways. You can't just go around with your clone in some other place. They'd be suspected as a changeling!"
Pinkie crossed her forelegs.
"Fine. C'mon, Anon. We're going."
She unzipped the crystalline wall, and dragged me in by my semi-existent hair.
I guess I'll be living a relatively normal life for now...
Just Not now
7525436 Self-editing things.
7525447 Now now is much Different then not now.
7525662 :P
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Well, still I tried to read it, though it did not make me a happy camper, and as expected the point of the story went right past me.
And it's protagonist is called "Anon".
Yeah, ima outa here, sorry.
Honestly, it's not badly written, though Pinky Physics are taken way, way, way out of proportion. The shorter chapter structure works well with the style, though I would usually not bother reading anything under 2k words.
On the other hand I did not find it funny, at all, and "wry comments" lacked wit or observational humour to my taste.
Cute, but essentially pointless would be my verdict.
For good "Pinkie meets a human" thing, I'd recommend the "FOREVER" by Chengar Quordath, it's funnier and done way better there.
7544830 ...aww...
Oh well. Story's already complete. Time to move on!
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Story status says otherwise...
You might want to fix that.
7568446 I'm actually gonna continue the story instead of writing a sequel. I've got a new chapter that I've been slowly working on, since things like that are fun to write.
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Yay!