Twilight and Flash have been married for a couple of years now and finally are going to have a child. Twilight will now have to deal with the troubles of having a child, a new student and her princess duties, as Flash will try to help his wife from all of this trouble. While their daughter, will be the biggest disaster in their lives.
If you dislike Flash, please do not dislike this story for that reason. Only dislike if writing is horrible.
This is a redo of the old Living with the Sparkles that was original belonged to Viynl Scratch who sadly left the fandom. Viynl has given me full permission to continue this story.
Sex tag is there for some sexual references and some crud language.
Cover Art by Moonlightprincess002
Chapters (2)
Wow, what a start
This wasn't bad. The story itself is pretty good. (I'm not too big into pregnancy stories but this one caught my eye.) I noticed one or two spelling errors here and there.
For example
should be spelled "Castle." But other than those and a few awkward spots like . . .
(This seems a little redundant.)
Over all you did good. Other grammar Nazis might not agree but that's their problem.
7431792 I know.
7431812 Thanks for pointing those things out.
7431838
No problem bud.
7433373 Your welcome
The description on the appearance of the baby just made me laugh! Like it must be strange looking. (No offence to you) I don't think it is entirely Flash's baby!? Lol
Just saying
7436532 I know, but I will explain the appearance of the baby later.
next chapter?
7592720 Sorry for the long wait but I promise that I will update it on next weekend as school life is hard right now with exams coming up.
7595257
No problem. Can't wait to see the continuation of this! Was a big fan of the original and really liked that first chapter.
The sexual references I can understand, but does crude language really necessitate a sex tag?
I really like this. It was totally worth the wait. Sorry hear that life has been going badly. I hope thing improve for you and that we get more of this amazingly cute story.
So I wonder how these three new foals will impact their nation?
great work!
please update