Have you ever had one of those days?
You know where you go to sleep in your bed and wake up the next morning in a forest not only as a different gender but also a totally different species with no clue how it happened?
No?
I suppose it's not exactly something that usually happens.
Anyways my name is Scorched Wing, least that's the name I took as I can't remember my old one for some reason, and this is the story of how I went to sleep as a human in a world where technology and logic ruled and woke up as a talking horse in a world where magic rules and logic took a permanent vacation.
NOTE: I usually write in Third Person but this fic will be in First Person so please give me some.leeway as I'm not the most expirance with this perspective.
NOTE: Chapters are uploaded unedited.
NOTE: This is being written as a break from the types of stories I usually write so that I can clear my head, as such updates will be random and pretty much cover whatever I think up to have happen.
this sounds interesting I will put it on my to read list.
Self-insert huh? Well, there are worse fictional universes to write yourself into I suppose.
7415533 its mostly just because I can't think of any other sort of fluff pieces that will clear my head of my usual stories darker themes.
In short this is basicly a generic story I have no real plot planed out short of I'm there and have no idea what is going on or why.
While I am able to read this, I cannot help but to feel as if this story is very... Hurried? Will continue reading but I recommend an editor.
7415843 it may be a bit hurried. It will slow down more so later on as things calm down for the main character as she adjusts to what's happened.
And I will look into an editor when able.
... Something is really bothering me in the way you write, though I can not place my finger on what ecactly it is. I think it's the way you try to include humor in EVERY sentence, but I am not sure.
7415863 that will calm down later. This story is basicly written in a style that I am not accustom to and thus am out of my element with it.
My usual story are very dark and this is me trying my hand at light and happy so there will be hiccups along the way as I adjust.
Yeah, sorry. This story just doesn't fit my tastes... I gave some reviews and I hope they were worth something. Gonna sleep now, ba-bai!
7415884 thank you for giving the story a try and reading what was there before deciding. I appreciate it.
Also thanks for the reviews they do mean a lot and help me out.
Have a good night.
Editor needed like seriously needed ....
On the other side it's a good beginning and I'm curious will jedi and havoc appear again or are they simply there to be thrown out?
7418200 I'm working on an editor.
And we shall see.
Dude I'll give you a thumb up but you have to promise me that you'll get yourself an editor to check before you publish.
a few sentences dosen't make any sense and a few others you have to switch letters to the left or right to get what you want to describe.
7418296 I will get an editor but do to the fact I need to be on WiFi to upload and send work to people and I have no clue when I am able to get to such places (of I'm lucky once a week) I don't like leaving stories I am actively working on without content that long so id still I'd still upload unedited with some sort of mark in the title to shoe it is unedited and then replace with the edited chapters next chance I get
This is why you should make your oc humanoid.
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Sadly while my character is indeed turned I to my OC she is from a world that didn't have MLP FiM so as to avoid future knowledge as well as being a tourist
hahahaha Demon Horses hahahaha.
the pain.... oh darn..
Good start.
Best way to come out of a coma??
Slam your head on a tree
Ding!
scorched would be great at cinemasins
7422061 the irony of that is I am a big fan of them.
7422141 hahahaha nice! same here
a vary good start to what appears to be a good story.
editor is needed or is it I am starting to think this may be a running gag the more I read.
Is aid
I said
it appends every time.
hum I must say after reading several of your story's I know your wording is a bit different , but there is defiantly something going on with this story.
this is a good story and defiantly worthy of reading and looks to be geared to be a long story witch is a good thing.
ok I am going to throw a chaligon at you Scorch215 as I have read most of your story's in the past.
here is the chaligon I would like to see this story hit at lest the 500k word mark.
XD
well that could have gone worse party wise.
and Scorch it's okay to cry, you don't have the man card anymore plus there are times it's manly to cry. this is one of them.
it's amazing how many people make Twilight a coffee adict to get going in the morning.
Hey JJ, shouldn't you be in Manehatten?
3 or 4 cups of coffee that would not even get me started i need pots of trucker's coffee.
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i was thinking the same thing JJ should be in Manehatten.
i good few chapters good work.
A totally understandable reaction.
YES, FINALLY SOME NEW CHAPTERS!!!!!!!!
So many refrances.....can't wait for a "Guys Read" one.....
7535664 many refrances?
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Ok, but that was still funny to read
I’m sorry about that and for disrupting the arty. A bit of a reference via typo
Surprise mother fucka!
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“It’s alive!”
And if that's not a reference, I don't know what is!
That, and a few other various jokes and things that made me laugh.
TL;DR
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all run for the deadly confetti!!!!!!
Well let's be honest ... it was a appropriate reaction to being treated to get shot point blank with a canon ... although the running away part may be a bit too much... but I guess his/her fight or flight reflects are were just doing their job.. I guess
Wait she has the best setup to become one of Equestrias best sci-fi/fantasy authors and write about her live on earth, her experiences in gaming, she even could plagiarize the living hit out of other authors works all she would have to do is write it down, show it a publisher and make tons of bits. How isn't she thinking of this? Human history is so rich with stories and legends, true stories and mhyts every child knows she could become the j.k. Rowling of Equestria and does nothing?
7548741 remember this is the day after she finally realized this isn't a dream.and she is actually a Pegasus mare now so still not the best at thinking clearly. Plus need to make bits between books.
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The fucks a chaligon?
I believe you meant "to the"
Loved the party cannon reaction btw.
Ha! Fourth wall break. (or am I mixing that up?)
Despite being a side project/story, it's still very well written. Look forward to both this story and your main ones.
Wow has been a while
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Welcome back^^
(Please don't let this be a final posting before going quite forever
Ok seriously Wing. become an author. (Your conversational skills are not that good and there is way more money in writing stories than in reporting stuff. )
Think about it just write about human stuff and get celebrated for being like j.k. Rowling or Tolkien.
Also you have one of the most kickflank prereaders imaginable
Just write human history or a story line from a game and let Twilight check it then go and get that book printed.
Profit.
It's what I would do, in case of me plopping up in another dimension.
a good chapter.
overall that night was filled with alot of plannign and luck. one to go wrogn means the end of everything we know.
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Maybe the editor will change the tone of her interview, she doesn't appreciate that and decides not to become a reporter after all?
DEMON HORSE XD
you got a good 7 for a rating incase your wondering
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I hope that the rest of the fic is as enjoyable
Awesome chapter! I just hope it isn't long to the next one.