• Member Since 30th Aug, 2014
  • offline last seen Feb 3rd, 2021

Sorcerer


I'm not a writer looking to change hearts and minds. I'm just a guy looking to spread a little magic here and there. So, sit back and enjoy the show!

Comments ( 8 )

Damn... not bad, not bad at all.

7445523

Wow. Didn't actually have too high of hopes for this. You actually like it? :rainbowhuh:

7445530

Yeah, its pretty well written, and so far the characters seem likable and you've set a good beginning for the story.

Experimental or not, this definitely grabbed my attention!

7447267

Huh, guess I'm doing something right then. Care to give a review of the first chapter?

"The Princess was corrupted by her radical rays and slayed her sister the moon princess in a mad surf tournament."
Wait... That doesn't sound right but I wanna read it anyways! :heart:

7447480 Not explaining absolutely everything at the beginning was a smart move, though I really can't provide an opinion of the pacing considering that it's something I feel that I myself still have to work on. Regardless, keeping some revealing details secret always helps reel me in!

7448524

Woah, radical, dude...

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