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Kastrinn


I don't always trust stairs, they seem to be up to something.

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Queen Chrysalis had been planning this attack for years, and storing power to take over Canterlot, but it was the Elements that scattered us apart. If that Princess hadn't comeback, we would've won. Now what's left of us is me, and that's what I know of. All I do know, I need to survive what ever happens next.
Now dive into the challenges General Bellose has to face during his time as a prisoner in Canterlot, filled with 'juicy' action.

WARNING: (Trigger warning, Torture, Gore, and Bad Words)
Please enjoy this changeling story, even if you don't like what this story has in store.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 11 )

Look at that, he actually won. Let's hope Luna keeps her end of the deal.

Comment posted by Kastrinn deleted Feb 18th, 2017

Can't wait for the next update.

8051776 Then I'll see how quickly I can get the next chapter up then, as well as making it a enjoyable chapter, too. :ajsmug:

Question... Did anyone who read this story want the changeling to escape? :unsuresweetie:

8053924 I did. Well, to be honest, sometimes it was a little bit hard for me to follow the story. The princesses were, at least for my taste, a little bit too much OOC (especially for a story that isn't marked as "Alternate Universe"). The death sentence was just the icing on the top of the cake, especially since characters like Nightmare Moon and Discord have (arguably) done worse and didn't get a death sentence. Well, of course thats all a matter of personal taste.

8056373 I knew something felt off. Thanks for that.

Well that was abrupt. Lots of room for continuation in many different directions, yet it is ended here, on a rather dark and dreary note. Perhaps something will develop from this, but if not then well done anyway.

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