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Fabulosity


Welcome! I enjoy writing fictions based upon the the human side of MLP, that both contain normal and erotic content. I hope you enjoy!

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Hey guys, hope you enjoy the story. Working with two difficult characters in my opinion, found this one alittle hard to write up. But, hope you enjoy it regardless! :raritywink:

I would love to see a good hot quickie between lemon zest and vinyl scratch

A Sugarcoat/Adagio and a Sonata/Sour Sweet fic would be nice as well.

Will you be making more Hot Coffee Quickies? Because I'd like to see one between Adagio and Flash.

Well done, it's a nice fic if you have a few minutes to spare to read. I don't know if you plan to do a series based off the plotline started here but I for one would love more of it.

Is it that I actually liked this ship? Before and after this fic? To be quite frank, actually, I am GLAD that there is a 'SugarLight' clop fic... it was really good!

Also probably my favorite SugarLight clopfic! :heart:

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There's more than one? I've barely ever seen any Shadowbolts clop let alone this pairing.

7512201 Well... it's the only one that I know of! And it is



AWESOME!

Are you a native Spanish speaker by chance? It's just your heavy use of the subjunctive mood is odd and a bit off putting in English, but would be perfectly normal in Spanish.

SugarLight clopfic? Instant fav

7511825 It will come, don't worry. Plenty ideas floating around right now, just need the time. :raritywink:

7511881 Two good ideas, wonderful more food for the brain. Thanks for the suggestions. :twilightsheepish:

7511892 Yup, I'll be writing tons more! Dagi & Flash, not a bad idea. ~

7512012 It's a possibility, it is something I will highly consider for sure.

7512030 Thank you! I agree, there isn't enough fictions on the Shadowbolts, they were such good characters IMO! Don't worry, more to come! And yay, i'm glad you enjoyed it so much. :heart:

7512265 You're not far from the truth. Not Spanish, but a close neighbour lol. But learning English was abit strange for me growing up. But, this is how i've always written things - from a prospect of first-person within my own mind. Hope you enjoyed it regardless. :yay:

7512817 I'm glad you liked it. :pinkiesmile:

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It didn't bother me, per se. But it is noticeable and does pull one out of the story a bit. We Germanic types expect things to be a bit more concrete. Whether someone would do something is far less important than if they did. Even within one's mind, the "would 'x'" construction feels alien to an English speaker.

On a more positive note, this was the only real clue I had to your not being a native speaker. It's just a particularly glaring one.

7511709 I just created a new group called SugarLight for one of my friends. You could join in if you'd like, and add this story to one of the categories. :twilightsmile:

Going to the whole "english second language" thing mentioned above, you might do well to find an english speaking editor to help brush up this.

As is, it's really hard and clunky to read.

~Skeeter The Lurker

7513566 Once again, thanks for the feedback. I'll have to do my best to alter myself in improving this in the future. :twilightsmile:

7513569 Okay, sure thing! But i'm not even sure how I go about adding the story to the group! Help, give me directions! :fluttershbad:

7515004 Thanks for the input, I don't have the luxury of having a pre-reader at this moment, but it matters not! I shall continue to improve! :twilightblush:

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Not hard to find on this site, for sure.

~Skeeter The Lurker

7515972 It's easy! Just go to groups, click on search for group, and search up 'SugarLight'. It should say made by: LilBronies, well now MissAquamarine. Hope you find it!:twilightsmile:

Loooovely! I seriously haven't seen enough of this ship, so this story is very refreshing and rewarding! It was sexy and sweet and very satisfying. In regards to what others are saying, however, I would be more than happy to pre-read a fic for you and help with any kind of editing :heart:

I never thought you'd be a squirter, Twilight.

:rainbowlaugh:

7584835 I appreciate you as always Mini, sure i'll be sure to ask you if I need the help! But i'm mostly just glad you enjoyed it. :heart:

Adagio x Fluttershy or Adagio x Twilight from me.

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No way! Go for it.~ Just credit it and shoot me a link, let me hear it when you do! :twilightsmile:

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Wow! You did so well! Excellent job, keep up the good work! Totally subscribed to your channel. If you're up for anymore, just let me know! :heart:

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