7571219 The part where Adagio explains the plan, is similar to how Yzma from Kuzco emperor's new groove, where she makes a plan, and then finishes with the brilliant part. And then someone corrects something. The other one is after Sonata's idea, both Adagio and Aria make Lego movie reference: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=008pxdaMMOo See the clip above, and you will understand.
IF I can offer some critique; You used 'but in the end, it was worth it' twice. The way Suri says her feels her name feels forced the way it's said. I would've gone with "You'll learn the price for crossing Suri Polomare." And Suri hid a paper clip and small bottle in her pussy okay, but where did the paint buckets, lighter, gasoline, cloth and chloroform come from?
I think you may benefit from a co-writer and proof reader.
7572189 The other things around, were already inside the boutique. But i can agree with you, that i need to remember your advice. Thanks for reminding me
Very strange that girl
7571219 The part where Adagio explains the plan, is similar to how Yzma from Kuzco emperor's new groove, where she makes a plan, and then finishes with the brilliant part. And then someone corrects something.
The other one is after Sonata's idea, both Adagio and Aria make Lego movie reference:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=008pxdaMMOo
See the clip above, and you will understand.
That bitch!!!!!!
IF I can offer some critique; You used 'but in the end, it was worth it' twice. The way Suri says her feels her name feels forced the way it's said. I would've gone with "You'll learn the price for crossing Suri Polomare." And Suri hid a paper clip and small bottle in her pussy okay, but where did the paint buckets, lighter, gasoline, cloth and chloroform come from?
I think you may benefit from a co-writer and proof reader.
7572189 The other things around, were already inside the boutique. But i can agree with you, that i need to remember your advice. Thanks for reminding me