good story I be watch,

I kind of surprise Cadance does not knew some kind of dick girl spell to allow her to knock up twilight some time down the line

Cool. More TwiGuard. I read the others, loved them, but never faved. Love your work!

Update from King of Beggars: Woot!

Twiguard update: Woot!!

Erotic Twidance: http://i3.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/original/000/421/458/6ca.gif

As for Sundowner the only reason I haven't read it yet is that I'm not usualy a huge fan of Equestria girls stories and won't unfairly go into reading one until I'm in the mood for it. It will get read, up voted, and prob faved but in the future.

This is sick and wrong.

So sick.

So wrong.

*sigh*

*faves*

Another Royal Guard story!?
The hype is real! Can't wait for more

Another great story. I'll have to catch up on The Rising when I get the chance

Yes, yes, YES! All! Of! My! Yes!

Wait so, is this a full-fledged sequel or just clop?

Wait, Empress of Steel? When is this coming out?

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It's the next project after I complete Sundowner, the current major project I'm doing. If you want TwiGuard 3 sooner, you should support Sundowner to help motivate me to finish it quicker!

Basenji and Spitfire. I'm going to guess Basenji and Spitfire.

It was pretty entertaining, even if you skip over the clop. Well... not skip over it, but not read it primarily for masturbatory purposes.

“What’re we going to do on the bed, Twilight?”

(Pomf> =3

Omg, you tease! now I m gonna be waiting for empress of steel and it's probably going to take a year to write :(

7565042 It's dresden like, holy crud, he nails shimmer as a very different styled dresden, but i dont care much for shimmer either. Yet KoB manages something good. It sorta shocked me. I dont care much for the EQG stuff, or any of that usually, but its solid writing.

7566099 interesting. Thank you for the info.

Oh and my vote is Shining and his harem!

7566107 You are very welcome, have a great day.

Cadance was a bit larger than she was, and so carrying the spoiled princess was a little like carrying an unwieldy couch that bounced, gyrated, and kept trying to kiss you – though she would never, ever make that comparison out loud.

Or maybe more like Princess Mi Amore Credenza...

7564876 who said she doesn't? Only thing that happened is the Empire beat her to the punch.

Still, Twilight should SO be the one to get pregnant for a second child. Empress omake, maybe?

Yes! So happy to see this.

Also, some of the best clop I've ever read on this site.

This was amazingly well written. The pacing, the dialog, and the language used was all above reproach. This story felt, for lack of a better term, genuine. Every part of this story felt like real sex between two people who knew each other very well and loved each other very deeply, there was real, honest emotion in it, and I'll be god-damned if it wasn't hot.

I'm honestly surprised that you haven't written something like this earlier considering that you're one of the few authors on this site that write genuinely likable and believable characters, which is the most important part of pornographic reading material.

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Sundowner is a really well written story. It shares many of the same strengths that Twiguard has, namely the amazing characterization and the stellar pacing that KingofBeggars does so well. Believe me, if you like Twiguard you will enjoy Sundowner.

Flirting, teasing, mutually enjoyable antagonism. This feels exactly like an epilogue to Rise. Your pacing and fluidity of character action/development are superb as always.

7566375 yea but knew they luck twilight give birth to twins,

Oh please, oh please, oh PLEASE! Let the next story be about Spitfire and Basenji! I would LOVE to see what Basenji could do with those fingers of his. Mmmmmmmmm.

And great story you have here! Not overwhelming with clop and still focusing on the love and humid between them.

Can't WAIT for "Empress of Steel"!!!!!

And thanks to some crazy ancient love magic of the Crystal Empire, Cadance was carrying their baby – that was different, too.

If Twilight was growing a little parasite carrying a child as well, would the children be strange fraternal twins? Also, would a female-female pairing only result in female children?

And now Twi Guard has a new anal kink. Cadance is crazy skilled in bending a pony's sexual preferences.

Another great entry to the series, even if it was clop. Not that I didn't enjoy it, or that it doesn't fit the story as of Act 2.
I remember thinking this was my favorite story series on the site. Now it's Sundowner I'm really looking forward to. Either way, whichever you happen to update first I'll definitely enjoy it.

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I hope it's them as well. I've been rooting for that ship since the two of them first met.

But if it's not them then I'll vote Shining x Someone. The Spike x Rarity thing is already canon in this, so he's really the only one left unless he really throws us a curve ball and ships Celestia or Luna.

7579980 Maybe Shining and Luna. A belated "thank you" for saving her.

7579980 Seeming as Shining is following much of Twi's original plot... I would have to say it would probably be Sunset Shimmer.

Hot story and a nice sequel to the previous ones in the series. :)

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I hadn't actually thought of that ship, but now that you've mentioned it, I absolutely approve of it.

But I don't know that it'll be the one that happens. Is the mirror even in the Crystal Empire right now? Cause if it isn't, then that rules her out completely, at least in terms of being part of the second pairing for this story. And even if it is, and even if Sunset shows up during the wedding celebration, it would be kind of odd for her to just immediately jump in bed with Shining Armor given her personality (and his, for that matter).

why do I think those mare are going to end up as maids/hoofmaiden who help out around the palace and maybe even help take care of the little baby

There was anal (however brief). And the Archangel said thia unto the story, and it was good.

Chapter 2 needs more anal, though.

Okay that was most certainly not all sex as advertised... But I take considerable solace in the fact that it was better than all sex. It was funny, cute, romantic... and then sex. And then those things again. Also those things during. Nice work.

I really liked the parallels in their behavior (and I find 'sun damnit!' to be funny for various reasons) and look forward to whatever the future installment here may be. I have no investment in Spike/Rarity, even with their ages being roughly the same in this continuity I just don't care for that ship; they're better off with Lyra/Ditzy. It would still be entertaining in the hands that wrote this, but I will admit I hope to be surprised by some other pairing. ...It just occurred to me that nothing requires it to be a pairing; two isn't a required number here, really... Ah... I think I'll just head out and await developments with no further speculation.

Upvoted and faved, enjoy your day!

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Well, it definitely depends on how much they've been drinking...

I love that you wrote clop after saying so many times that you wouldn't. It was a very engaging story that just happened to have a lot of clop in it.

This was some of the most realistic sex I've read and it involved two ponies. The big thing is that they act like a couple, or at least the way a couple does in my experience, and they're such an endearing couple.

Now to Sundowner, which is the name of a very popular stripclub where I grew up. No relation I assume.

I expected many things.
I didn't expect clop.
...
I don't mind though, keep up the good work :)

Going to be honest, I hope this doesn't continue for long before the next arc.

“Just be flattered,” Cadance said with a yawn. “All it means is that our subjects are just a little bit completely madly in love with you. It’s just a part of being royalty. Congratulations, babe, you’ve arrived.”

Very nice mork, but the fact that I was hopping this was the third arc kind of put me in a downer for a moment.
Good work nonetheless.

When is the next chapter going to be added?

I was a bit... Turned off by the anal. I don't like butt stuff.

I wasn't expecting clop, but with all that dialogue, it didn't really detract from the story; it's more like a reasonable thing for them to be doing in their wedding night while they have an important-and-also-lovey-dovey conversation.

I'm looking forward to a continuation, and I'm… not so much calling as kinda hoping that the other big relationship ends up being Spitfire/Basenji (with maybe a side of FlutterArmor?)

Also, while it was a little ambiguous at the end of Rising, I see that here you've shown that, as far as the crystal ponies are concerned, Twilight is the ruler and Cadence the consort, no matter what the connection to the Crystal Heart says. I look forward to finding out if that has any political relevance. Also, how long it takes for the implications to dawn on Twilight, who so far seems to think it's just a bit of hero worship combined with her status as consort.

There's just one thing missing:

“Just be flattered,” Cadance said with a yawn. “All it means is that our subjects are just a little bit completely madly in love with you. It’s just a part of being royalty. Congratulations, babe, you’ve arrived.”

Twilight's reply really needed to be something along the lines of, "If I hadn't, this would've been a crappy wedding night."

How goes story 3

Will there be more

Will there ever be finished?

We need more to this story please

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Oh hey Neo, did not know you liked this story.

Yeah where is Empress of Steel for the TwiGuard story?

“Because you’re the one they call their Empress of Steel ,” Cadance said teasingly. “Plus, she kept shooting you looks while we were talking.”

Wow i can't believe they call twilight sparkle empress of steel