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Unless you are changing or using some alternate head-canon for Reptile's species you've dun goofed. :ajbemused:

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Not really to anyone who even remotely knows about Reptile and considering the story has been tagged as Human and put in the HiE group it's worth pointing out.

No I mean reptile is not a important character in Mortal kombat seris

What does he do that is so important? Besides his in mkx storyline...

Whats the term for the character you're best at in MK? I know in SMB it's your main, so would this be the same? If so I main Johnny Cage in all Mortal Kombat games, and Jason Voorhees in MKX

Five years have passed, I had turned twenty three and the civil war was still going on, Kotal had made a peace treaty with Earthrealm. Mileena who still leading her rebel army now had a powerful amulet at her disposal,but not just any amulet, it was the fallen elder god Shinnok's and thanks to that Mileena wiped out half our forces with it.

With a wave of my finger and a flick of my dick one zap from me will kill you quick so get on your knees to suck and blow but not right now Ive got to go

I love this story so far! Hope to see more!

Just Rainbow Dash will be enough to ruin the first impression

Ooooo. I can't wait for more.

Will razor see his father again or will he see someone else from earth?

Make more, this is really good. :pinkiehappy:

when will Spike become his disciple?

Will this continue?
Its really cool

Really want to see what is planned for Spike too

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Oh don’t worry it will I’ve just been on a really long hiatus sorry about that

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Ok
Looking forward to it


What will happen with Spike?

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Don’t worry it I will get back to writing again, it’s just I was going through some personal issues for a while

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Well, Razar deserves better.

From the Mane Six. And hopefully, and eventually from the Kombat Kids too. And should owe Razar a bunch of big apologizes.

Meanwhile, Spike and the Cutie Mark Crusaders exchanged nervous glances, knowing that they had more troubling news to deliver. Sweetie Belle hesitantly spoke up, “Fluttershy, there's something else we need to tell you. We saw a terrifying fight in the forest – a ninja in green and black clothing, The ninja, he... he killed the ghoul with his bare hands.”

Fluttershy’s eyes widened in shock, her peaceful demeanor momentarily shattered by the revelation. “Oh my goodness, that sounds so dangerous. We must inform the others,” she said, her voice filled with concern for the safety of her friends and the forest.

Spike looked around at his friends before asking, “Fluttershy, do you have any idea who this ninja might be? Fluttershy gently patted Winona, lost in thought before replying, “I’m not sure, Spike. It’s all quite concerning. We must warn the others so they can be prepared.” Fluttershy’s voice held a tone of determination, showing her resolve to protect the forest and its inhabitants.

Seriously author? You just let them casually ignore that this Ninja basically save them from the clearly hostile Ghoul? :facehoof:

Does it really matter if he's dangerous? He's only a danger if you STUPIDLY made him an enemy to ya!

It's better to be his friend and a powerful ally.

Unbeknownst to him, Zecora, a wise and observant resident of the realm, had been watching from between the trees. She could see the look of a broken soul in Razar's eyes, the pain and turmoil evident in his every movement. Approaching him with a gentle but determined stride, she could sense the lingering shadows of his past weighing him down.

"Brave warrior, I see the burden you carry," Zecora spoke softly, her voice filled with empathy and understanding. "But know this - even the strongest soldiers can be broken by the trials of war. You are not alone in your struggles, and there is always hope for healing and redemption."

Razar looked at Zecora, her words resonating deep within his troubled heart. In her presence, he felt a very small flicker of hope, a twinkle of light breaking through the darkness that had consumed him for so long. As he took a moment to breathe in the wisdom of her words, Razar wanted to believe the Zebra's words, but horrors he faced in Outworld were to great he wonders if there really is any hope for him.

At least Zecora is very wise, and is at least a friend to our protagonist.

I just really hope the Mane Six don't make another over cliche of falsely attacking him, especially you Rainbow Dash!

🙄 😒

I'm open to listen to suggestions, and also let me know which Mortal *Kombat* *character* you guys would love to see in the story, even if there dead cause come on no one every truly stays dead in Mortal Kombat anyway check out my other stories let me know what you think of those I am officially back.

If it's any Mortal Kombat Characters?

At least be either the "Kombat Kids" or Johnny Cage and Sonya Blade.

I just want this stupid and slightly racist/xenophobic animosity finally be repaired between Razor and these characters from the beginning.


You know what talking about, Author?

However, just as he was about to deliver the fatal blow, Razar heard the unmistakable sounds of the Tarkatan horde drawing near. Realization dawned on him - he would not be able to defeat an entire horde on his own. Reluctantly, he knew he had no choice but to retreat, his mission incomplete.

Before he turned to leave, Razar leaned in close to Mileena, his voice low and menacing. "You may have escaped death today, but remember this - you won't be so fortunate next time we meet. Your reign of tyranny ends now, but your punishment is far from over."

Why doesn't he just give her a quick death by either chopping her head off or rip out her heart out, instead of wasting his time making a empty death threat monologue?

Cuz he AIN'T the one that did her in.

This is probably a excuse for Mileena to brutally die by that fan-hated character of D'Vorah.

I am really surprised this got a new chapter.
Awesome

Can't wait to see how much powerful and badass Spike would be once he ends up being trained by Razor maybe.

Wonder what other MLP characters would show up too?

Nice this is getting more chapters often now


Not fond of Spike couldn't be able to free himself from the net trap though..

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Has the author ever addressed any of your concerns? Or have you just dropped the story entirely?

Starlight Glimmer rolled her eyes. "This is serious, Pinkie. We need to be prepared for anything." Spike snorted. "You think a little thing like a ninja is going to scare us? Come on girls you've faced worst things than just some lone ninja"

That is a bit rude, Spike. And you are heavily underestimating a Mortal Kombat character, trust me.

Heck, I bet you chew out your own words when Razor reveals his past, and both you and the ponies will be traumatized by the violence, gore, death, destruction, and horror that is the Mortal Kombat Universe.

Applejack's face turned red with anger. "I'm so sick of these dang traps! Can't we just have one minute without setting one off seriously that there ninja is really paranoid?"

Ninjas are supposed to be cautious for a damn reason.

It's no brainer.

Razar's jaw clenched, a hint of anger rising within him. "Because I helped Earthrealm defeating Shinnok who had been freed from his prison, Kotal Kahn saw it as a betrayal of our own realm's interests he wanted to appease to Shinnok by helping destroy Earthrealm in hopes in convicing him to spare Outworld, and he branded me a traitor. He believes that I chose to side with the enemy, but I knew that the fallen elder god wouldn't be sparing any realm from his wrath." Razar explained to the Zebra

Zecora's eyes narrowed, her voice taking on a hint of concern. " But did he not think of the consequences of letting Shinnok do as he pleased, how dangerous it was to be making it kind of deal with the devil. Razar's eyes flashed with anger, his voice low and bitter. "Ah, but Kotal Kahn was blinded by his own ambition, Zecora. He saw an opportunity to gain power and prestige by aligning himself with Shinnok, and he took it. He didn't care about the consequences, as long as he benefited from the deal. And that's what makes it so infuriating - he's willing to sacrifice the billions of lives of all the people in Earthrealm just to spare Outworld. I mean I know Earthrealm wasn't my home anymore, but it was at one time, I was raised there. When I returned to Outworld, my father told me that Kotal Kahn was furious with me. He said that if I went back to Outworld, I would be executed on sight."

If ask me, it show's that Kotal Khan WASN'T even better than Shao Khan himself.

Not only did he betray to "Kombat Kids" in Earthrealm from Mortal Kombat X.

And despite knowing of that traitorous D'Vorah.

He has to gall to make his own deal with Shinnok as well!? What a hypocrite!!??

I was still pissed at him at both MK X and MK 11 with his selfish antics.

No wonder Past Verison of Jade rightfully kicked his ass.

Razar's shoulders slumped, his eyes roving the ground as if searching for an answer. "It's... complicated. You see, my biological father, Syzoth... he was an enemy of Earthrealm for years he participated in the Shao Kahn's invasion of earth, and as part-Zaterran, I'm... I'm afraid of being judged by them. Of them seeing me as a monster."

Zecora's ears perked up, her voice filled with understanding. "Razar, you are none of those things. You're a complex person with a rich history, and that's what makes you strong."

Razar's gaze snapped up, his eyes searching for reassurance. "But what if they see me as a reminder of my father's past actions what if they think I'm just like him?"

Zecora's expression turned resolute, her voice firming up. "Razar, from you have told me - this Cassandra Cage and her family are not like that. They're good people who care about others and if they care about you than your father's past actions or your appearance shouldn't matter to them" she said.

Razar's eyes drifted up, his gaze locking onto Zecora's with a mixture of hope and trepidation. "You're right, Zecora," he said, his voice barely above a whisper. "Cassie and her family have always been good to me, despite my... complicated past. And if they're willing to forgive me, then maybe you're right, maybe they won't care about my father's actions or my appearance.

Zecora's expression softened, her eyes filled with warmth and understanding. "Razar, you're not asking them to forget the fact you are Zaterran, you're asking them to see you, the person you've become, not the person your father was, what he did has nothing do with you, you are not Syzoth, and if they're worth your time, they'll see beyond all that and love you for who you truly are. You deserve that, Razar."

This is exactly what I was talking about earlier, they should feel ashamed of themselves for what they did to poor Razor.

Sure, he didn't reveal his identity at first, but for good reason.

I just hope that him and the "Kombat Kids" and Johnny Cage/Sonya Blade will mend their friendship.


Just hope they can see each other again BEFORE the events of Mortal Kombat 11 begins. Because we all know what happens to poor Sonya Blade of the "present" timeline.

And also dealing with that Time Titan of Kronika will be very complicated too.


And last time I checked, we never seen Cassie Cage, Jacqui Briggs, Takeda Takahashi, and Kung Jin ever again with either Liu Kang's or Shang Tsung's own endings from Aftermath DLC.

Nor Mortal Kombat 1 with "Keeper of Time" Lui Kang's own "3rd rebooted" Timeline.

( And the DLC with Takeda, and those "evil" alternate versions from that Second battle of Armageddon that just casually died like they were henchmen chumps doesn't count. )

Razar smiled, his first smile in the longest time, since he left Earthrealm. He believed that no realm had any place for someone as broken as him, but maybe just maybe he could make *Equestria* his new home.

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You do realize that they're still high up, and Twilight already explained that it was a bad idea, right?

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Still could have come up with a solution instead of having him being at Razor's mercy like that though..

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Don't forget the Mane Six and Starlight also being at Razor's "mercy".

And it's kinda their own fault for being too persistent and a bit too arrogant to go after a literal Ninja that knows how to make wonderful forest/jungle traps.

Razor OR any other Mortal Kombat Character isn't like any MLP Villain/Villainous or Badguy/gal that the Mane Six has ever seen or faced.


They will frickin shit themselves IF they faced actual horrible MK villains like Shao Khan, Mileena, Shang Tsung, Quan Chi, Sektor/Triborg, Noob Saibot, Goro, Kano, Dragon King Onaga, Havik, D'Vorah, Shinnok, or Kronika.

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Its just a problem for Spike's case, ok..
It just bothers me.

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Well, it's just that some other people/commenters are starting to annoyed of you complaining about your favorite purple dragon not getting his "way" in every story you read. :applejackunsure:

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I just can't help it, ok..

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Yeah, well.

I read somebody else's comment that talked about ya already said this "sorry" speech over and over, but you never learn from it.


I'm not trying to be rude, just want to let you know about it. And if you actually read this person criticizing you, yourself?

Are any of the Mortal Kombat fighter OCs introduced in this story female?

Cassie nodded, her voice barely above a whisper. "Yeah...because he was my closes more so than jacqui, and now he's gone, because I called him a monster, I didn't know that, that creature was Leon the whole time."

You also gave hi that chest scar. Don't forget about that.

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Again, sorry if what I am saying is bugging everyone but I can't just bottle it up, ok
I just can't help it.
I don't know what else to say on that but I wished they stop jumping at me for even breathing Spike's name. I am not hurting anyone or threatening anyone or ANYTHING.

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