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This story is a sequel to Edge of the Ponyverse


Six heroes brought together by fate, or something more? Mare Do-Well, Fili-Second, Flutterbat, Rainbow Dash, Nightmare Rarity, and Applejack must travel the multiverse in search of a villain who wishes to do the unthinkable. End Harmony itself.

But will this ragtag team of adventurers be able to come together? Or will they be torn apart by forces beyond their understanding and control?



I don't own anything!

Chapters (48)
Comments ( 125 )

Well now, this is already looking to be very interesting... And now Wizard Sunset Shimmer can hear the Narrator. Now that's just wonderful.

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Anyone see that movie "Stranger Than Fiction"?

SUNSET SHIMMER: "WHO SAID THAT?

7590991 Just imagining her slowly going insane with the Narrator commenting on everything.

Oooooh, tension... I approve.

This deserves so many more views cause I just bing read both stories in a day. This is so so good! I love it!

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Glad you're enjoying it. I've got a lot more planned for this series.

Oooooo, intensity. I love it!

OK so some pieces are falling into place but I am still so confused about who everypony is working for!

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All will become clear. There's a lot more to this story that's yet to be revealed.

Aw... That scene with Maud and Pinkie was so heartwarming. And Suntrix went soft, who knew? Now onto the next world... which is... what?

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You'll find out. I'll say this though, it's a world of great injustice:rainbowkiss:

Totalitarian Equestria led by a tyrant Celestia and her elite Elements of Harmony, huh? This is going to be very interesting indeed.

Do you draw all the pictures? Cause they're beautiful.

A bit confusing with the Suntrix parts and all, but I'll probably get it. So far, really good. I am so glad you've been able to update so often; not many authors do that :pinkiehappy:. From what I can tell from the fan art, this should be exciting.

P.S. Are the Ponexiles (little fan name I thought I'd try) actually going to meet Sunset or learn about her?

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I draw all the pictures, yeah. And the only reason I've been able to release so consistently is because I completed the story to a certain extent.

As for Sunset, well she'll appear more in the story later on but I'm going to warn you now that she doesn't have a lot of connection to this story. EMPHASIS ON "THIS STORY"

Is this the Nightmare of this universe or another because I thought I'd read that Celestia had "ended" Luna after Twilight and the others defeated her. Did she come back to life or was she never really dead? Or, like I said, is this another Luna?

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You'll find out, don't worry.

Ah ha! So that explains it. Thanks for the clarification :pinkiesmile:.

BTW, I noticed in your fan art on deviantart, you have a picture cover of villains. From the looks of things, you have:
· The Shadowbolt Fluttershy from Rainbow's universe
· The Pinkster (Joker Pinkie) from MDW's universe
· What looks like evil Rainbow from Applejack's universe
· An Applejack that might be the one from Nightmare Rarity's universe
· A Rarity who might be the succubus Rarity from Flutterbat's universe (albeit with interesting armor :raritystarry:)
· And, most surprisingly of all, what looks like the FREAKIN MASKED MATTERHORN :pinkiegasp:

I know I'll have to wait like everyone else, but I'm going to go out on a limb here and guess that this is the group Mr. 4 is gathering; ponies from each of the Ponexiles' universe's with a major grudge against one member in particular. In addition, they're also negative counterparts of each of the Ponexile members.

At least that's what I think :twilightsheepish:.

Still if that's the case, why is Matterhorn evil :rainbowhuh:?

Guess I'll have to wait and see. Keep up the good work :pinkiehappy:!

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You spoiled yourself! But I guess you'll just have to find out sooner or later:pinkiesad2:

So we got some allies in this messed up world? Nice

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Yeah, you're right :pinkiesad2:. Still, I don't know EVERYTHING about the story, so there's still some surprises to come :pinkiehappy:. Besides, a couple of those were just guesses (still not sure about the Rarity and Matterhorn). And I'm way more excited about seeing how the Ponexiles deal with the other worlds (art is awesome by the way). Plus, how will the Anti-Ponexiles react to having to work with ponies they hate, even if they are alternate versions of them? Hmm...

I'll have to find out by reading the rest. Keep up the good work.

Two powerful god-like beings engaging in combat mortal to determine the fate of their universe?
... I didn't know I was being treated to front row seats for the Apocalypse! Someone pass the popcorn!

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You think this is apocalyptic? Just wait:ajsmug:

Oh golly goodness that was intense!

That was... WOW, that was something. Also, random DrWolf cameo at the end... Approved!!!

Wow. That. Was. Epic :pinkiegasp:! Though I correctly guessed that Mr. 4 WAS recruiting enemies of the Ponexiles, I never expected for our heroes to get split up and get sent to the different universes from your art. I thought they'd visit them one at a time. Then again, that would probably take too long :twilightsheepish:. Plus, I didn't think that Matterhorn was the voice, nor that Filli-Second was a traitor (so to speak).

What IS up with Matterhorn, though? What could have possibly caused one of the greatest heroes of her world to become a crazed madmare? And just what is Mr. 4 planning exactly with the gatherings of these ponies? And when will you cut poor Sunset a break :rainbowlaugh:?

Guess I'll have to continue reading to find out. Now the good stuff's coming. Keep up the good work :pinkiehappy:.

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We're only entering part 2. There's plenty more to come

First story in this Stranded Arc is a Noir crossed with Daring Do? This is going to be... very interesting....

Exciting! Glad the story's finally back, so to speak (I always look forward to reading a chapter a day if possible).

Does Bruno mars is gay?

"They are trapped in a cell of their most precious memories. And the only way out is to face the most painful memories of all.”
Very interesting. So by that, he ment trapping one of them in THE OTHER'S worst memories. Real nice twist there :raritywink:. I also didn't expect Sombra to be such a nice guy in Flutterbat's world. You are still so full of surprises, my friend :pinkiehappy:.

Hmm... Matterhorn try to freeze Filli-second at the worst possible moment?!

I really gotta wonder what will happen with Sunset Shimmer...

Throwing Mare-Do-Well, somepony who operates almost entirely on magic... Is now in Wonderland....
I need to invest in a bottomless bucket of popcorn, this is going to be goooooooood~

Huh, deep character development in a Wonderland-themed chapter... Never thought I'd see the day.

Cadance as the Queen of Hearts... Brilliant. Also, I'm starting to piece together a crackpot theory about something our dear "friend" Mare-Do-Well is hiding from us. Should I wait or should I tell?

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I think it's pretty obvious by now, but you should probably keep your mouth shut.:raritywink:

Also, I kind of wrote the Queen as Starlight Glimmer:twilightsheepish: Cadence was never a unicorn.

7650484 Eh, Cadence made more sense to me, but upon second reading, I realized you meant Starlight.

Also, I know your secrets on the characters~...

Sincerely, the writer formerly known as The IDA Official. WINK

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I knew who you were when you first started posting, Mr. Official:ajsmug: That's why you should shut your trap, its about to get good!

Should've guessed the identity of the Jabberwocky from the get-go, figures he'd grow bored of a world ENTIRELY of chaos. ONTO THE NEXT WORLD AND BRING ME MORE POPCORN!!!

FINALLY WE'LL GET THE BACK STORY!

The road to hell is paved with good intentions, as it seems.

Changelings... Why did it have to be Changelings....

Oh gosh you scared me for a second. I seriously thought Rainbow was going to stay

Obvious trope of being discharged of duty to save the world may be obvious, but still works nonetheless. Oh, and Mr. 4 finally recruiting the Pinkster into his ranks? Yeah, like THAT'S not gonna backfire on you at all.

Well, now isn't THIS an interesting new location? I eagerly await to see what further lies down the path.

Please tell me that this leader of Aklopoplis is who I think he is...

How many words in this story, and HOW MANY VIEWS?

This is injustice. I blame clopfics. Stupid rotten stinking disgusting clopfics, hogging all the views. Clopfics are cheap attempts to get attention. Attention that stories such as this deserve more of. Screw everyone who write clopfiction.

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