Twilight Sparkle has received a rather odd challenge from Princess Celestia for Extra Credit. This challenge involves writing a short story, poem, review, or any piece of written literature that does not use a word known as 'The'. Truly, it shall prove a daunting challenge, as this word is used at least 50 times per day by an average intelligent being! Can th- er, shall she succeed?
(And will I? Sounds impossible, but I'm both drunk and high on caffeine, so Challenge Accepted!)
There could be more, I wasn't paying it too much attention.
dr.seuss twilight
look to dr.seuss
also this
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NOOO! I shall have to fix that. *Defiantly gazes at story*
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thanks.
So far two people found three 'the' that I missed. Now corrected. I am disappointed in me.
//flips table
GET DUNKED ON
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Still curious as to why I can't seem to be able to post the video itself instead of a link. Click to 1:32
It's harder than it sounds to not write something without using the word 'the'. I'm so used to doing so that I do it without thinking. This also makes it harder to proofread it. That being said, thanks for pointing it out.
I think you might need to fine tune the sentence where the last "the" and the "^" appears. "Placing Cadance's poem back on ice box," does not quite work as a sentence.
looking heart-attack-inducingly adorable as a result
poem back to its former ice box spot
She nearly shouted and hopped eagerly
Can you do that? or maybe Think you can do that?
I never said this looked easy. it looks impossible. but hey, striking through
theour forgiven word is actually a very nice touch that adds tothethis story.to be fair, it was a bit short. but hey, she was a foalsitter, not a writer and it was ncredibly cute
Twilight sat down and levitated said paper in front of her as she thought
so you did,
AAAAAAAAAAAAW!!
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You've probably already guessed this, but every time there was a
thecrossed out it was where I made a mistake. Those weren't just put there for silliness' sake.7599443 happy accident then
I enjoyed this story. I was honestly expecting Twilight to jot down something like:
Roses are red
Violets are purple
And while I am writing this
I am standing on my Curple
Just so she'd completed Celestia's Challenge whilst fixing Cadences mistake by being accurate to Violets color :P