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Soufriere


Pray that there's intelligent life somewhere out in space, because there's bugger-all down here on Earth.

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It's the weekend. What to do when one has plenty of free time but no money? Hang out at the public park, of course. That's exactly what the Dazzlings do. They also talk to each other, begrudgingly. The conversation quickly takes a turn that leaves Aria Blaze questioning her connection to reality.

Technically, this story is the prequel to and setup for the Burritoverse! Click that link for a helpful guide to this continuity.

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Clowns to the left of her, jokers to the right, and here she is, stuck in the middle with you.

Hey! All of these lines from songs! Thats really clever! Great work!!!

7843821 - Oh trust me, if I hadn't decided at the outset that Aria wouldn't quote any songs, that one would have been front and center. Actually I think I may have already had either her or Adagio quote it in their "Burrito" story (shameless plug). :derpyderp1:

7848868 - Thank you! :raritystarry:
For the record, There's nearly two dozen unique references. Not bad for 1600 words.

Were you on something when you wrote this, or just Sonata? No, I don't mean you were on Sonata, I mean Sonata was on something. This seems like that philosophical insanity rant I went on last December.

8015410 - Pardon me for taking so long to get back to you.

To answer your question: No. My medications do not allow me to take any such things without serious risk to my own health (what's left of it). Sonata is high on life.

I was also completely unaware of your philosophical rant, and still have not read it – I began this story in July 2016 and worked on it in between other stories (a simple glance through my blogs will show I talked about this story long before December); due to IRL issues and dissatisfaction with one part of this fic, it took nearly six months to finally get ADITP to a form worth publishing. I hope you're not accusing me of ripping you off, as plagiarism is something I take very seriously (years of university will do that), and I always try my best to give credit where due.

Finally, I'm very sorry you didn't like this story (you were literally its only reader during the time that third downvote appeared, so it wasn't difficult to figure out).

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Not at all, and frankly I'd be surprised if you HAD read it, as the rant was a comment made on an Undertale comic on e621, a site usually used for erotic art. You'd be surprised how much non-dirty and very entertaining artwork can be found there. And some of the discussions people have there can actually be mentally stimulating.

Random, but not unpleasant.

I feel these guys
Mostly sonata though

That "Keep Off The Grass" sign isn't the boss of me!

“That’s easy for you to say; you always leave me to take care of her,” Aria groused.

Yep, I sure do feel bad aria has to deal with this all the time. :fluttershysad:

“I’m gonna make my sister see I don’t need her watching over me!” Sonata insisted without looking at either of them. Instead, she clambered over the small knoll. Her butt stuck almost straight up, as if to make up for some nonexistent pointer-dog’s tail. Aria observed her out of the corner of her eye, wondering if they might all be better off getting her a collar and tags. And a rabies shot.

Ok that is just mean and rude to say about sonata. 😠

“These boots are made for walking,” Sonata said as she lifted her right leg, waving it in a matter not unlike that evil old man who shooed her and her sisters off his lawn when they tried to partake of the wild blackberries growing along his property line.

Which they were stealing by the mentioning of it. :ajbemused:

“Oh Lord, it’s a game. Sometimes you’re cool; sometimes you’re lame,” Adagio said, still concentrating on the sky.

Oofity. 😬

“I can stick my head in the microwave and give myself a tan,” Sonata insisted.

Sounds both stupid and dangerous if you ask me.

“Ugh. This is the worst. I feel like my life has been taken over by some sadistic hack writer who just wants to see me suffer,” she grumbled croakily to the sky.

Talk about a total ending plot twist.

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