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All I heard at the end of this chapter was "MISSION FAILED WE'LL GET'EM NEXT TIME!"
There is only one mod in Xcom
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Is this story at all based off of Stardust?
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What he said. What are you talking about?
7622996 No, at least I hope not. I'll try to be different from Stardust as much as possible.
so how civilian is apple jack compared to x com right now? i understand she from a dangerous world but the tech and hostile aliens blood guts death goop casualties of war another horror show for her so might need some practice maybe using those bucks or learning some new things for her to use like stronger earth pony magic or reinforced bones or gaining street smarts like a white lie for other's safety just stuff to test her morals a bit and learning a more mature friendship lessons.
7625542 I must type. The RNG gods demand it.
armatures might be right, i'm not sure in what relation you mean it.
here's what wikipedia said.
Armature (electrical engineering), one of the two principal electrical components of an electromechanical machine.
Armature (computer animation), the kinematic chains used in computer animation to simulate the motions of virtual characters.
Armature (sculpture), a framework around which a sculpture is built.
Three different things here, most likely i think you mean the electrical one and most likely not the computer animation thing.
So, can you clarify?
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That is what the Advanced Warfare Center is for!
This just my opinion, but I think you should do a interlude. One were it lets us see how Applejack tries to reintroduce herself back into normal society, and shows how she interacts with others now as to before her disappearance.
Well let's pray to the game gods to protect your game from corruption
*prays*
7673242 Agreed!
So if I understand this correctly, you're pretty much doing these chapters as you go through the campaign?
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Kinda did, at least before the campaign broke. Don't worry, I'll include them back into the story.
7675028 Mkay
More! I want more!
Replace that with "was"
Between those, add "only"
7675895 Thanks. I do my editing on my own.
that was beautiful.
this was AJ's first big kill and more to come
Missing some words here...
I think you know what they are
7678039 Got it.
Dang
she went full on BRUTALITY mode on the VK
FINISH HIM!
Brutality!
I actually think spotter is a better name for it! well, you want to keep this true so i guess it must be changed...
She just pulled a Gears of War Takedown!
So romance will be a thing
Huh.
This should be good
All the opportunities for jokes to be written in the story should prove to be glorious
KO!
The Winner for this death battle is Apple jack!
A good friend of mine actually taught me a lot on how to play poker, I was actually pretty good at it. Won myself a few games here and there too. Only for recreational purposes though, I'm not a gambler.
Raise your Dongers!
Why must it end here! I want more!
AJ Promotion
bzzzzzttttt and applejack turns into flufflepuff
Silly Humans Applejack is a badass.... she bucks trees for a living .... im glad it wast muad that was sent just think of the horrors she could do i mean she throws rocks and makes nukes go off
Resilient?
No kidding. Earth ponies are damn tough no matter what the world is
First, great chapter. Another chapter to mark another day of near death misery with AJ.
Second. She be acting like a wounded soldier at D-Day.
Third, Are you like a medical student? You described the operation scene with so much detail. I'm impressed.
Okay, I had expected you to say she also had a Fusion Blade, or even the Arc Blade, since I think that even Rainbow Dash would realize that a Medkit, Powered Bolt Caster, Grenade, or Shredstorm Cannon is not a sword. You may correct this further on, just initial immersion break.
7689357 I'm gonna have her panic when she sees the Berserker Queen again.
see the mistake at the start?
Don't they have plasma firing guns at this point?
7692854 Fixed.
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AppleJACK should be AppleBLOOM
she has just invoked Murphy's Law, when will the aliens find Equis?
The humans are starting to sound like di*ks with all the intimidation and stuff they are using to respond to every stuff, they could be more suttle.
Xcom 2 is starting to sound like an amazing game though, i wish i could play it.
7692958 Noted, I'll try to make them less aggressive. Problem is that I wrote a couple of chapters in advance, so you may not see that change for a while. Ish. Actually, the next time their aggressive is just one instance, I think. Unfortunately them being aggressive is a crucial transition to a mission. Jarle is still pissed and acts aggressively, basically telling Applejack to tell the next part of the XCOM time line to further drive the point home. I might change it, it depends on whether or not I can think of a better idea.
7692951 i1.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/newsfeed/000/867/898/558.jpg It won't be what you think.
Well 4 chapter's one day..I want more..
7693003 The reason is because their mainly pre-written. A blog post details this but the short version is that I found a game-breaking bug and was forced to restart. I have a few more chapters that are already written.
Oops. See the error? Also remember to place 'to' before 'her' when ya fix this
this otherwise makes sense but the word what kinda screws it up. The sentence starts like he's asking for an answer to a question instead of saying a fact with a questioning undertone....
Because of this, it would be better to chance "what" to "that".
7693763 Fixed.
One small mistake here
There's no need for two "off" words. They conflict with each other awkwardly making the sentence sound like one's trying to combine two different sentences saying the same thing. Right now it looks like you took starting half of the first and ending half of the second and merged them.
So remove one of the 'off' words and it'll be good to go.
Hope i helped
Time to start gearing up for the bug bitch hunt!