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LysanderCordis


Just a guy who likes fat pones

Comments ( 21 )

You've got me interested. I'll eagerly await the next chapter.

7650611
AAAAAAAAH Senpai Noticed Me!!!
I hope you enjoy this story as much as I'm enjoying writing it. Your work really helped me come to terms with my bisexuality and you are a great writer. Thank you for taking the time to read my first piece of real smut!

So, are there any particular sex tags we should know about before going in? I ask because I can enjoy male growth or hyper when it's solo or M/F, but I just don't have any interest in M/M, so if there's any of that I'll respectfully pass this one by.

I'm very interested. Do continue.

7650807

There will be male male romance. This is my first story so I guess I'm not very good at tagging things yet. I'll change that now.

7652867 No problem, and I wish you good luck with your writing.

Fat Thunderlane?

Fat, ANTHRO Thunderlane?

You... you will write more. That wasn't a request. :pinkiecrazy:

This is wonderful!
7653726 I concur. The Thunderloon must go on!

UUUUUUNNNNFFFFF TO THE MAX

7655707

I'm glad you liked it. The story is finally starting to pick up speed. I hope you continue to enjoy my efforts!

Oh, glorious Schadenfreude! :rainbowlaugh: Will we get to see more of Caramel becoming Thunderlane's bitch in the future?

7656784

Yes, however the next few chapters focus on Big Mac and Thunderlane's relationship before the penultimate sex scene.

Just a thought:

Thunder saw that his wingspan stretched a good thirty feet across, more like an albatross than the hawk-like set he once sported

Thunderlane says this himself pretty much word for word just a couple of paragraphs later. You might want to ditch that sentence, because it comes across as redundant.

Other than that, very nicely done. Really enjoying the chemistry between Thunderlane and Big Mac.

Just a quick question, is Thunderlane getting taller, too?

You alive, friendo?

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