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Before My Time Comes

Fluttershy had a small injury on her wing, but more importantly, a serious, but unknown emotional problem. she is only comfortable talking to rainbow dash, which takes a turn for the worse as her depression takes over.

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fabianguzman18

fabianguzman18 #1 · Sep 17th, 2012 · · · Before My Time Comes ·

how did fluttershy did and why should be better explained

Briianz

Briianz #2 · Sep 17th, 2012 · · · Before My Time Comes ·

This is a good story, but there's too many plot holes.
1. How did Fluttershy injure herself?
2. Why did she commit suicide?
Did you keep these plot holes on purpose? Otherwise, not bad.

nicktaylor

nicktaylor #3 · Sep 18th, 2012 · · · Before My Time Comes ·

1290380 Yes, they were kept for a reason, gives the reader a little sense of mystery. Although the injury was not meant to really get attention.
And for 2, As the story went, she was going through a bad time, and couldn`t handle it.
This was our (at least my) first FiMFic i actually gave thought to, to it is bound to have some flaws.

Briianz