After the last event of the Friendship games, Twilight does some studies on the magic she collected. When the tampering goes too far, she unleashes the mgic and the mane 6's abilities transfer to the main 6 shadowbolts. Will Sunset and the rest of the mane 6 help the Shadowbolts, or leave them in the dust?
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Interesting start. I'll be tracking this!
I only saw a few punctuation errors. If you need an editor or proofreader, I'd be happy to help.
I'd make the chapters longer as well as describe the setting in better detail, but other than that, this is a great story so far!
Same here!
Thanks, I agree that my pacing needs work, so I'll try to work on that!
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In the comics, Ms. Harshwinny taught at Canterlot High.
I like where this is going!
I find it amusing that Sugarcoat ponied up just by saying "The square root of 9 is 3."
Interesting, you could combine all of these into one chapter, or you could flush out all of them.
That doesn't sound like something Twilight would write.