Starswirl the Bearded. The most powerful and intelligent unicorn the world has ever known. But even the greatest of legends must come to an end. But before his death, he left a couple of words that he didn't want to go unsaid. Now, Princess Celestia, his closest and dearest friend, reads his final words, and suffers the weight of what he could've never said.
Co-written by: Parodox
That was interesting. Any chance of more chapters? Though not sure how it would proceed.
Oh my.... Alright, i know I'm supposed to feel sad and sympathetic, but i got the chills. As vague as 'The Master' came out to be, i got some immense foreshadowing from him, and the idea that Celestia's humility was wrought through starswirl as a result.
... Kinda wonder if those wings were given to rainbow dash after some magic gene splicing... So she in turn would create the Mane six and save the world.... Hm.
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There might be a sequel if this story does good
Sequel!!!
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Technically there is one, but it might not be what you might think.
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Good story but it reminds me of a story I always wanted to see and wasn't already done.(I'm no writer but maybe it can give you ideas)
In the story Celestia first gains control of the sun and the unicorns do the job realise that there levredge against the world is in danger so they try to kidnap young Celestia to kill and/or brainwash her that way ponies would still need them to raise the sun and they can keep all the riches and luxuries that comes with holding the world hostage.