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A Machine from the future comes to past to wipe out 7 high school students that stand in the way of an evil AI's control over the planet.
"I can't be reasoned with. I can't be bargained with. I don't feel pity, remorse or fear...and I will not stop. Ever. Until you seven are dead."
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terminator one huh? well this is gotta be good i look foward to see more
Terminator meets Equestria Girls ? This crossover is so gonna be overloaded with huge amounts of testoterone filled awsomeness.
Why is Kyle Reese is Terminator?
And what kind of terminator model is he?
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It you inspiration this terminator genisys then where is pop aka Sarah guardian?
I'm now waiting for the comments complaining about the exposition dump that was this chapter. Don't hold back either!
Since my fic and my OC is inspired by Terminator, i'll give this a read soon
7933333 Hope you enjoy it!
Not a bad start. But I would recommend rereading you chapters again before you upload to avoid some mistakes. One mistake jumped out at me before I even started reading and that was "He eyes", that should be "His eyes". There are fair number of mistakes like that as well as others like misused or not used words. For example in the note he left for the mane seven, when he was saying that people didn't have to die unless they brought them to him. You just said "and one else will has to die" when that should be "and no one else". One other thing, numbers should be spelled out unless they part of an actual name, sound more professional. (That was something someone told me)
I'm not trying to put you down here, just trying help. I do this with my own fic, rereading the whole chapter to make sure I've covered everything.
Please don't see this as negative.
This is going to be interesting..... Followed!
This takes too heavily from Genesis. Not to put down but if you only used it as inspiration to make such scenes your own you'd have a more positive reception.
Not bad but again please reread your work before upload. I found several mistakes that were of miss used words and in one instance you missed a zero off end of T-1000.
Again, try not to copy exact scenes from Genesys. It's ok to use the movies for inspiration. Also right now I fail to see the importance of Sarah when it's the Mane Seven taking her role.
Can't wait till the next chapter is this like the second and third terminator movies?
Is this another Kyle reese or is this an Terminator 2 one?
20% Cooler!!!!!!!
NO!!!!! Not Flash Sentry!!!!!