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Phil the Time Wizard


I'm Phil and I like ponies. Canterlot.com is the best pony site ever. You should totally check it out. Bye. :)

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This is a story I originally published on deviantART, June 12 of 2011. It was later re-edited and eventually posted to Equestria Daily in October of the same year. Since I started using FIMFiction recently, I figured it best if I start moving all my pony stuff over to this site so you can find it all in one place.

As for the story itself, it's a fairly short oneshot on my favorite ship, RariDash. Not a lot to it, really. Just something cute. Hope you enjoy.

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Comments ( 18 )

seems legit i'll take a look

D'aww :rainbowkiss::raritywink: it's so cute, and it reminds me of my Raridash shipfic I did a while back only in mine, Rarity gives Dash a vest with the name Dash stitched over the heart.

great fic, very well written (really), and perfect ending. ^^

If there's one thing better than parallel construction, it's parallel construction that isn't obvious about it. And the payoff is great.

What a sweet story! Well-told and great descriptive skills.

Very well done. I'm not really a fan of Raridash, personally, but I did enjoy this very much. Have a thumbs up.

I've never seen this pairing before and it's actually pretty cute the way you wrote it, It's very well written and original in the form and style of writing.

May I ask where you got that picture?

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It was originally drawn at my request by a user on the Canterlot.com forums. :twilightsmile:

The artist later put it up on deviantART, where you can find it here.

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Thanks, now I have an idea for a fic revolving around the concept :rainbowdetermined2:

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Heh. Thanks for reading this (again). Glad you enjoyed it! :twilightsmile:

I still really love the image of Dash in a suit. She would be really cute. As for the jerk comment, I don't know. I can kind of see her using somewhat classier insults, but at the same time when it comes to Blueblood I can also see her maybe becoming a little more direct than usual. "Jerk" works fine enough I think.

nice read ^.^ was a very lovely story hehe

I remember this from deviantart, there is simply not enough raridash stories. Could you perhaps continue this, or create new ones?

I remember this from deviantart, there is simply not enough raridash stories. Could you perhaps continue this, or create new ones?

I haven't read many RariDash stories (Probably because there aren't many) but I really like what you did with this one. Even if it isn't my OTP you made me cheer for the pairing. Thank you for writing this!

Is it just me or is it that IF you but some more work into this, write a few outlines of how the relationship is working, telling the friends, the first official date, the first night, and if all goes well the possible mirage.
That is just something i would think about if i wear to write something like this (if i had the skill).

Anyways a realy good story and it was rather cute to. A 9.5/10 from me. (Not that that number has any meaning or anything. :twilightblush:)

RarityDash writing RariDash, can't say I'm surprised.

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