Twilight and her friends are sent to help investigate a series of strange events in the small town of Centrotlia, ranging from disturbing sounds in the night to the disappearance of foals. Joined by a timid stallion recruited by Princess Luna, they will try to discover the cause of these events and bring those foals home.
Rated T just in case, will not contain excess amounts of violence, language, or suggestive themes, but may contain some dark material.
This is my first attempt at a fanfiction in like a decade and my first attempt at a My Little Pony fanfiction period. Constructive criticism is welcome and appreciated, I just ask you be courteous and tactful.
Edit: Made some quick edits following the very helpful advice of ReluctantBrohoof. Some adjustments to narrations and descriptions and I combined the first two chapters after the prologue to make a longer Chapter 1.
Consider me intrigued.
I love this story
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Thanks. That means a lot to me
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So good
Honestly really excited for this story.
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Really?
Thanks. I guess I must be doing something right for a few people to be excited about it.
Well handled, I like the background, makes Mystic very interesting. Also I think this may be the best explanation of how one become Luna's student I've read.
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Thank you, I'm glad you like it.
But, umm, did you forget a few words in your comment? I'm having a hard time understanding the second sentence.
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Mmm, not that I know of. You're not the only writer to give Luna a student, though typically it's a suddenly ability to dream walk or something similar. Here however, we have someone who worked their way to it through exploration of magics more in Luna's field than Celestias.
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Just to be sure, did you intend to put something along the lines of "best" or "better" between the words "the" and "explaination"
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Whoops
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Common mistake.
Once again, thank you for commenting and I'm glad you liked it.
A wabbit? Eet's wabbit seeson!
This rabbit is important to the plot, isn't he/she?
HMMMMMMM thinking face
Some spoilers? Ow. Too bad I've already been spoilered about it.