I know it may not work into the story, but will Nightlight ever show up in this fic maybe to win Velvet back or just to make a mense. Also will we find out why they broke up in the first place
8794028 I could've sworn I specified it was a mutual seperation in chapter 1, or at least 2, but I looked through and didn't see it. I need to check with my editor about this.
8794028 Okay, I went back and added the explanation. So you don't have to go back, here it is:
She wasn't expecting Night Light, and hadn't for years thanks to their divorce. Their romantic feelings had faded over time, and they had both agreed to go their separate ways. Though there was a stallion in her house: her son! Her son who had come over for a family visit.
I want to thank you. If you hadn't said something, I might've missed it entirely and finished the story without realizing I forgot that detail.
As to whether Night will show up.......maybe. But if he does, it won't be for those reasons you said.
8795599 Nice, I brought it up cos I was expecting you would give an explanation once he did show up and they talked for a bit but I'm good with how this turned out. Looking forward to see whats next. Maybe find out what Twilight thinks of all this, probably jealously lol
Sweet Daisy! The love! NOW to see about Cadence appearing and Herd To be made
Another great chapter.
awesome chapter.
That bit with the mark on the belly, Kanashiipanda's influence has been far reaching.
8733885 In case the cover art wasn't evident of that enough.
I know it may not work into the story, but will Nightlight ever show up in this fic maybe to win Velvet back or just to make a mense. Also will we find out why they broke up in the first place
8794028 I could've sworn I specified it was a mutual seperation in chapter 1, or at least 2, but I looked through and didn't see it. I need to check with my editor about this.
8794028 Okay, I went back and added the explanation. So you don't have to go back, here it is:
I want to thank you. If you hadn't said something, I might've missed it entirely and finished the story without realizing I forgot that detail.
As to whether Night will show up.......maybe. But if he does, it won't be for those reasons you said.
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Nice, I brought it up cos I was expecting you would give an explanation once he did show up and they talked for a bit but I'm good with how this turned out. Looking forward to see whats next. Maybe find out what Twilight thinks of all this, probably jealously lol
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Maaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyybe
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Okay guys we can't keep reading this story, the author is clearly up to something
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