I don't write pony stories. I mainly write about humans or Equestria Girl stories.
Have you ever thought about what Eqeustria would be like if Twilight was a pegasus instead of a unicorn? What her life would be like and all those around her? Well this odd tale will show you what that world would be like. Her new personality, her new interactions with her friends and what this new life is like for Twilight if she was a pegasus.
Warning- Things may get a bit random
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Interesting, but you need a proofreader, Although I know they are not the easiest thing to come by.
If you can't find one, I suggest carefully reading your work (out loud if you can) yourself, making sure to follow it line by line, it can do wonders to your overall quality.
So Sunset came from the human world instead of self exiling herself there? Is there a story behind it? If yes I would love to read it.
Also, where are Sunbutt the Princess and Luna?
P.S.: Pinkie is a better stage magician than Trixie.
I was going to say 'and this is how mmc should have gone' with the whole switching destinies thing....... then princes dash came along and i skipped the rest
What....? How can you end it like that? It's so open ended I thought there were gonna be future chapters.
-dies complete status-
Wtf!? Seriously!? Write more chapters!
Why is spike is the girls in this story and why is princess cadence is twilight sister when shining is her brother too?
8056454 Sisters-in-law, kind of like the show
8057092 and did this twilight keep calling her sister all time?
8057115 Yes
8056415 I did thought about making a sequel that mainly focus on the female Spike and Twilight, but I'm thinking about working on some of my unfinished stories. And even then, that would be as a separate story and not an added chapter.
8057247 but you completely stopped where it could be continued. Hell with all the information you gave us, this could easily become a multi chapter story instead of a one shot
8056328 Sunset found the portal mirror from her world and after seeing how nice and interesting Equestria was, decided to have a double life there.
As for Princess Celestia and Luna, I don't know. They definitely existed 1000 years ago but both mysteriously disappear. However, if they were to appear, Nightmare Moon may or may not take the place of Princess Luna.
8057267 Hum... That's nice. I definitely would like to read that story. About Sunset finding the mirror and starting a second life in Equestria I mean.
And sorry if I offended you or Celestia with my last comment.
This looks like an awesome story. Can't wait until the weekend when I'm off work to read it!
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Like your cover art.
Reading now.