I write things. Sometimes they make sense.
When Sunset Shimmer decides to visit Equestria with her girlfriend – the human world’s Twilight Sparkle – she expects there to be some confusion. She doesn't expect to come home with a royal title.
Meanwhile, Equestria's Twilight Sparkle worries she's not evil enough.
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This was actually rather amusing. Will we be getting a second chapter?
Twilight's attempts at being evil is an insult to bananas.
I'm just laughing and also wondering what the hell I just read. Also, if Twilight's afraid of quesadillas and Celestia bananas, does this mean all Alicorns are gifted with a extremely odd fear of something?
What the actual hell is this ... LMAO, I might have just died from laughter
Well, this was very amusing. Princess Twilight going "evil" and having had an emo phase, Sunset becoming a Princess, this was all very nice. ^_^
Best evil Twilight story ever!
Dear Pony Twilight,
You have made a mistake in your hypothesis, you claim that the other ponies have a power that they gained through villainous acts and thus you must act villainous to unlock a new high level power in yourself. However the "Midnight Sparkle" incident was a panic attack brought on by pressure from Human Twilight's superior/teacher an act replicated with your "Smarty Pants" incident. In fact the requirements of your hypothesis would have been forfilled at your SfGU entrance exam where you created a rampaging dragon and transformed several ponies into house plants.
Yours Sincerely, concerned Ponyville
PS All but two villainous acts commited in Sunset's past has an equivillant in yours...
Man this is a trashy story (I like it though so not ment as a insult) but funny as @$$(. Can you try making a more cannony version (right personalities more serious funny less padded room funny ). Be curious to see how same premise but different approach would come across
This was certainly an amusing read. And pony Twi was just... well, she certainly didn't feel out of character. Good job with that
I see that this is marked as incomplete. Meaning... is there more of this insanity incoming?
Probably, after all, Sunset needs to have her coronation.
... Was the mare friend thing really necessary?
8108243 I'd like to say shipping is never unnecessary, but I've read a story once where it only detracted from it. Of course my memory purged itself from that abomination, but the damage is done.
Still, those two came up as cute together, so who cares?
And this was hilarious. PriTwi is just too adorkable to become a villain
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I just don't like stories with unnecessary elements.
That city that Celestia wiped off the map wouldn't happen to be Mareashima or Neighasaki, now would it?
666 views. You had best not stop here, friend.
I've just read it too, and it still shows 666.
Given that it was posted today, it should have been in 700s at least by now.
Suspicious, isn't it?
Edit: Now with 66 likes, almost 6 dislikes and 16 comments...
It was the banana, I know it!
What? Why does the story still have 666 views?? Especially considering the actual chapter has 744 views as of this comment being posted. Maybe someone is tweaking with the views behind the scenes...
8108388 WFT? Fine, I'll break it. We can have a story about our lovely not demon have that number.
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Not sure if its better for Spike to be ignored or babied. That was sure random and hilarious.
If there's any reason for Sunset to stay in human world, its to avoid this kind of craziness. Good thing Pony Twilight's attempt at being evil is as over the top as most of Twilight's other endeavours (which book did she get that cliche act from I wonder).
8108330 Then don't read this. Easy fix.
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I enjoyed the good idea this story had, I'm just saying the romance between Sunset and SciTwi was ultimately pointless and contributed nothing to the actual plot. Almost as if it was just there to keep Sunlight shippers from hating it...
Fun stuff, thiugh many of the concepts feel underutilized and only furtively explored. You could've gotten a lot more out of this. If nothing else, I hope to see the coronation.
I almost laughed my backside off at this bit.
View 1389, story's lookin' fine
For a scholar, sometimes Twilight doesn't think very logically...
She's already had her little adventure into evil when she mind-controlled a large number of ponies into fighting over a doll, and if having too much power drives ponies mad, she should have been barking at the moon when all of the alicorn power of Equestria was dumped into her to keep it from Tirek.
Nope, your depiction of Spike had it right. She's pretty mad.
I don't know what I just read. I seriously don't.
Upvoted.
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Actually, I think it was necessary.
After all, if they weren't dating, Sunset would have no excuse to bring her through (and not all her friends) when she was invited by Celestia, which would eliminate Twilight's entire comedy arc in this story.
Immediately went looking for a pic of Spike in a high chair, found one where he says he loves cocaine.
So... just so you know.
Great story, not sure if it's supposed to be crack and I think that's the hallmark of a good crack story.
Heh, CRACK.
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You could have gotten the same result if Sunset brought her because she begged to go for research.
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Wow you guys are putting waaay more thought into this than I did. In any case, the relationship is there because I like the ship. Not to appease any shippers. It might not have been necessary, but I like the two better together when they're in a relationship. So...
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loved this story was funny as hell needs more do a sequel please
This is brilliant! I shall toast to it.
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All in all, a needed, pleasant diversion. I can totally imagine Twi doing that.
I would be hard-pressed to choose between mind-reading and flight.
!@#$ phone ate my first go at a comment.
aka Pedestria…
in a horse's hindquarters? Hmm, how to phrase it…
Wear a fake? She has a spell.
I vaguely recall…is that a reference to an animation?
Or sandwiches?
Celestia made a note to order another tuba and another set of accent bedazzlers from Flim and Flam
Corrections offered without malice.
accentuate
Principal
throne,
(also, caps-lock is considered to be poor style)
aneurysm
first instance
hoof-pumped (cf. fist-pumped)
imbued with
consisted of
Is Spike still in the high chair?
>Somepony was almost certainly going to be tackled under the false pretenses that they were a changeling.
...has someone been reading *Sunset Reset*? :)
8112460 Yes. Yes he is.
A great short read. Twilight having a mild psychotic episode was my favorite part. It's usually funny when she shows her not-completely-sain side.
Edit: Also, the banana. That was hilarious.
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Thanks for the corrections! I appreciate it!
Also, if the sunglasses thing was related to an animation it was not intentional. But now I'm kinda curious.
Clearly, Sunset's time in the human world had the unfortunate side effect of making her sane.
8112701 When I saw the title, I couldn't help but think of this.
Absolutely hilarious. Twilight's current psychotic episode was a bit arbitary and would have benefited from a conclusion (even if only something like Spike being assigned a rolled-up newspaper and being ordered to slap Twi over the muzzle regularly and shout: "Bad pony! Not a supervillain! Bad!"). That aside, it was genuinely funny and I think that you got Sci-Twi's 'a sane mare in a madhouse' response precisely right.
I wear my sunglasses at night
So I can, So I can
Watch you weave then breathe your story lines
And I wear my sunglasses at night
So I can, So I can
Keep track of the visions in my eyes
I just lost it when Celestia shouted 'One ridiculous problem at a time'.
Look Twilight, if they're 14 hands or less tall, then they're ponies. I'd think you'd be interested in the technicalities.
Why do I want to see Twilight when she was going through her emo phase so badly?! Did she dye her mane and tail black? Did she wear dark eyeliner? Did she have nasal, eyebrow, lip, or tongue piercings? These are questions that I desperately want answered.
Theory, this Twilight is secretly a Time Lord.
That was delightful. :)
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Timelords don't have access to time powers outside their time machines, nor super senses. Twilight's just that good at speed reading.
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What about when the ninth Doctor perfectly timed stepping through a giant fan in the episode with the space station at the end of the world?