The worlds of Dragon Ball Z and My Little Pony Friendship is Magic become one and permanently merge together. The Z Fighters and The Mane Six fighting Dragon Ball Z villains together. What could be better quick answer nothing.
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Well, still slightly clumped together, but better. Try not to make it like a TV show, more like an actual written story. Take a look at some top stories and see what made their dialogue so amazing, then incorporate those elements into your story's dialogue and it will turn out much better.
Didn't Yajirobe cut off Vegeta's tail in the show?
1021031 Yes he did but I hate Yajirobe so I left him out of the crossover series on purpose.
Season 2 Episode 1 is finally here I hope you enjoy the continuation of this series.
It's good, but it's kinda written in TV episode format, which is notoriously difficult to read. Take a look at other action/adventure stories and you'll see a similar style of writing to what you need to write it so that people can actually understand.
Big text wall. Hulk smash giant wall of text!
So.. hard... to read..!
seriously.. try to separate the dialog
Okay, why does this have to be in TV-show format? Take a look at the other fanfics that involve stuff like this and you might get an idea of what it should look like. I'm just not following this, though it is rather good.
I can't wait til goku goes super saiyan
that my most favorite part of dragon ball z
Finally some comments
i expected a fusion but not a retelling of BOTH FRIGGiN shows
Really, why do you write this story like a TV show? It kinda annoys me.
Its just a block of words!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This... This whole thing feels like a summary.
It does not feel like a story, it feels like you are summarizing an existing story.
the grammar. dis grammer is bad. not good. bad. i can count multiple spelling errors. but still a solid story
Irk! Big, thick, blocky, so-old-school-car-crusher text wall! For Celestia's sake, use the SPACE BAR!
BLOCKBLOCKBLOCKBLOCKBLOCK!
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Dragonz ball Pe
Friggin WORD BLOCK
1341308 I agree
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2242161 lol
2252475 Gonna Un-Fave. I'm sorry. It's not the grammar, it's just that I haven't been reading it, and I don't think I'll ever read it. I'm sorry.
(Here you go, you really need to work on your spacing though!)
t's been five years since Goku defeated Piccolo at The World Tournament and not only did he marry Chi Chi and had a son named Gohan named after his Grandfather Gohan and he was visiting his friends Krillin, Master Roshi and Bulma at Kame House along with son Gohan for the first time in five years.
Meanwhile in Equestria Twilight Sparkle was reading the story of Nightmare Moon and how she was scheduled to return to Equestria after being banished to moon for one thousand years after Princess Celestia wielded and used the Element of Harmony on her. Twilight Sparkle tried to have her assisant and friend Spike the dragon warn Princess Celestia of Nightmare Moon's immenant return during The Summer Sun Celebration tomorrow but Princess Celestia wrote back to Twilight Sparkle and Spike after they sent her the warning letter
"my dear Twilight you know that as your teacher I respect your knowledge and diligence above all us, but you simply must stop reading those dusty old books."
Twilight Sparkle gasps before her and Spike are taken to Ponyville by way of carriage pulled by two flying members of Princess Celestia's royal pegasus guards and Spike starts reading the letter again where he left off
" I am putting you in charge of overseeing this year's Summer Sun Celebration held in this year's location Ponyville and I have an even important mission for you to do while you are there, make some friends."
Twilight Sparkle sighed as Spike stopped reading the letters and they met and talked to the other five members of The Mane Six for the first time after finding out that all of them except for Pinkie Pie who had jobs for The Summer Sun Celebration. Applejack and all the other various members of the apple family except for Applebloom, Granny Smith and Big Macintosh made food for the event which Twilight Sparkle ate too much of and got a stomachache, Rainbow Dash was put in charge of clearing the skies in Ponyville to make sure there were no rain or storm clouds by both flying with her pegasus wings and kicking all the bad clouds away with her two back hooves, Rarity was put in charge of making decorations and outfits for the celebration and Fluttershy with her songbird choir were in charge of music.
We then return to the Dragon Ball Z world. After not talking to our seeing his best friend Krillin, his teacher Master Roshi or his first friend Bulma for the first time in five years and introducing them to his four year old son Gohan (I know I said it's been five years since Goku defeated Piccolo and married Chi Chi but according to both The English and Japanese version of the very first episode as well as The Manga book Gohan is four on the very first episode, so I guessing that Goku and Chi Chi didn't give birth to Gohan the first year after they married)
Anyway Goku's older evil brother Raditz showed up and after telling him that him and Goku are both from an evil alien race called Saiyan's and that they are supposed to conqure and take over the planet
they are sent to as babies and sell it at adulthood but Master Roshi told Goku that his Grandfather Gohan found and raised him as a baby after finding him in a very small spaceship and that he was a trouble making baby until he had a really long fall off a cliff and hit his head, then when he miraculously survived he was very good and kind and then eventually saved the world from The Red Ribbon Army, Demon King Piccolo and his son named Piccolo Jr. who now just calls himself Piccolo.
Raditz then told his younger brother Goku "darn you Kakarot, if only you didn't lose your memory, you could taken over this planet easily years ago." (For those of you that don't know Kakarot is the Saiyan name that Goku was born with on Planet Vegeta before coming to Planet Earth to take it over as a baby)
Goku then told his older brother Raditz "enough I don't care if i am from some weird planet or if I do have some weird name, Earth is my home now, now get out of here!!"
Raditz then noticed Goku's son Gohan who still had his Saiyan monkey like tail despite being a half Saiyan unlike Goku and Raditz who were full fledged Saiyan's and told Goku
"Kakarot i've got a question for you?, that brat behind you is he your son, well I guess i'll give you time to think about my offer"
as he picked up Gohan and continued talking
"I want you to kill one hundred people on this miserable planet, only then will you seek me out and give me your answer you have one hour."
Goku told Raditz
"give me back my son"
before Raditz gave him a knee to the gut and flew away. Piccolo then showed up and despite their history offered to team up with Goku to defeat and kill his older evil brother and save his son Gohan. So Goku got on his Flying Nimbus cloud given that he hasn't learned how to fly by himself you and Piccolo flew close behind him but then the landscape and area around them suddenly began to change and then Goku, Gohan, Piccolo and Raditz were suddenly in Ponyville in the land of Equestria.
Raditz asked himself
"what's going on why has the landscape and area changed, are we still on Earth?"
Raditz then pressed the big red button on the scouter on his face and looked around and then instead of the words Planet Earth the words Equestria were on there instead.
Raditz then asked himself before Goku and Piccolo showed up "what's going on I was on Planet Earth until a minute ago, has this world somehow merged with another?"
Goku and Piccolo asked Raditz before challenging him to battle
"Raditz what's going on here, what did you do?"
Raditz said "i've done nothing somehow this world has merged with another and i am not responsible." Goku and Piccolo said "whatever let's just fight."
Raditz told both Goku and Piccolo after moving too fast for either one of them to see and elbowing them in the back
"whether we are on Planet Earth or Equestria, it matters not I will still beat the both of you and just so you know there are two more Saiyan survivors out there and their power levels are much higher than mine, even if you started training today, you would never be able to beat them."
Goku and Piccolo then stare at Raditz with their mouths open in shock as the episode ends. To Be Continued. How did the world's of Equestria and Planet Earth merge together and become one, will Nightmare Moon meet and team up with either Raditz or one of his evil Saiyan teammates to take over the newly merged world and will these two worlds ever unmerge and turn back into two seperate world again. Find out the answers to all these questions and more on the next exciting episode of Dragon Ball Z Saiyan's Are Magic a.k.a. Dragon Ball Z Friendship is Magic The Ultimate Power Episode 2 Z Fighters Meet The Ponies of Ponyville: Unlikely Alliance To Defeat The Saiyans?
Ok I fixed the spacing errors on the first one for the most part for you, if you choose to use it, now just do the same thing to this chapter and you'll be golden.
what about applejack, rarity, fluttershy, and celestia are they still dead and spike should have been bright back to life with vageta because the wish was anyone killed by Frieza and his men back to life but since spike was not wish back once unlike Krillin he could be wished back by Shenron and before the could wis back goku, krillin, or twilight bake to like they hade to wish there spirts to the earths check in station because the dragon would bring them back to life he bring them to the place the died for explanation watch episode 106 of dragon ball z
3234921 My bad yeah Applejack, Fluttershy, Rarity and Princess Celestia where all also brought back to life as well I just forgot to mention them and also yeah while I do know just about everything there is to know about DBZ I temporarily forgot about the earth check in station thing temporarily when I wrote this chapter/ episode my bad also I figured that since Spike died the same way as Krillin i'd wish him back to earth check in station just like Krillin even though in this story he only died once whereas at this point Krillin has died once in Dragon Ball and once in DBZ at this point.
I have a question for you story:
It is assumed that in the three years, spent the other seasons of MLP?
For example:
SEASON 2 - The defeats of Discord and Chrysalis
SEASON 3 - The defeat of King Sombra and Twilight turn Alicorn
MOVIE Equestria Girls: Twilight and Spike in another world of the Earth
Well, that's my question
4210808 Yes within the three year time gap the events of Season 2, Season 3 and Equestria Girls have all happened within this crossover series.
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4396441 That picture is so awesome.
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I just couldn't help it
Just askin' ,could you not put the chapter name at the top of the chapter page; If not could at least start making the chapter names shorter? Just askin'.
4756163 I'll think about it
How is this a story if you continuously make badly-spaced chapters in a episode format? Not to mention the grammar level of the story needs ton of work. Not to mention, you seem to skip through entire events just to get to 'good parts'. That is lazy, counterproductive to story development, and insulting to both of the series.
Not to mention the chapters you continue the post aren't even the generally accepted word amount of 1,000.
I'm usually very tolerant, but this is just downgrading the true quality of what DBZ crossovers have to offer like the popular DBPZ - A Costly Ramification, Raze's Journey, Rage of Broly, and Saiyan of Equestria.
Rework it!
4876558 Saiyan of Equestria..?
Now where have I heard that from...
*Checks my stories*
Huh, sounds familiar to mine!
What would happened if you abridged your story? (Team Four Star Style!!!
)
Thirty Seconds Later....
Nappa: are they there yet?
Piccolo, Princess Celestia, Princess Luna, Vegeta, Gohan, Rainbow Dash, Spike, Krillin, and Pinkie Pie: No.
Nappa: are they there yet?
Piccolo, Princess Celestia, Princess Luna, Vegeta, Gohan, Rainbow Dash, Spike, Krillin, and Pinkie Pie: NO.
Nappa: are they there yet?
Piccolo, Princess Celestia, Princess Luna, Vegeta, Gohan, Rainbow Dash, Spike, Krillin, and Pinkie Pie: NO.
Nappa: are they there yet?
Piccolo, Princess Celestia, Princess Luna, Vegeta, Gohan, Rainbow Dash, Spike, Krillin, and Pinkie Pie: NO!
......
Nappa: Are they there yet?...
Piccolo, Princess Celestia, Princess Luna, Vegeta, Gohan, Rainbow Dash, Spike, Krillin, and Pinkie Pie: NO!
Vegeta: GODDAMN IT NAPPA, Just Go Do Something, Go Have fun, I Don't care how....
I'm Loving the Story BTW!!
My Reaction to the Story not having a lot of words... and me being stupid...
this story has great potental but the spacing and manly the pacing kills it for me
Its bad I can't..understand what's going on