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dark ganymede
Just starting to write fics, constructive criticism is greatly appreciated.
dark ganymede
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Oh god were is this going gany
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Places. I'm surprised this made it pass the mods so quickly. Compared to last days.
and then rartiy found out what sweetie had planned for the colts and fillies of ponyville
I'll add it to read later. Multi-chapter clopfics can be either very bad, or very good.
I liked it, but there were a few strange breaks that broke concentration.
I liked it, but there were a few strange breaks that broke concentration.
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Could you say what they were? Other than that glad you liked it.
Why are we writing in italic?
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I didn't even see that. Formatting error on my part, just fixed.
I see bad things happening in Sweetie Belle's future. I don't think Rarity explained what just happened very well...
Oh...I'm not sure I even know where this is going. Maybe I don't want to know, but for the sake of curiosity...
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Does Rarity ever explain things right?
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At myself for enjoying this story so much ...
More please
Dafuq... Kids having sex... FUCKING.... REALLY
Good story anyway
Holy sheerrt, u wrote this dude, i thought this was someone else since you've been at work with your other stories
Dear sweet Jesus, why is this?
Awww. Scootabelle! How cute.
But Scoots helping Zecora? That seems more like Applebloom's thing. It's a good way for her to eventually marry up.
Awwww. Why is it always Mister Cake?
He's just a poor baker.
Good, but short.
Good, but short.
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I just assume Zecora is Scootaloo's parent figure.
lol
wait did he even know it was silver spoon? XD
dident seem to notice it lol
eather way not a bad clopfic but still needs some work like in detail and a bit longer sex scenes lol
but not bad i wana see more to this!
maybe with more people and maybe it turns out more people are into this club of thiers and turns into a orgy XD
I can't tell if me gusta. Mostly because it has kids in it. Feels wrong, but it is so good.
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Seems legit, given the circumstances. Though I forever ship Applebloom and Zecora, just 'cause.
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What do you mean? I just tagged her to avoid spoilers.
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Ok, thanks.
Okay so I gotta ask this because it's going in my group and I refuse to read foalcon, is there underage sex in this?
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Uh, yes. Yes there is.
I hope to see more chapters. this was great!
"Well I figured we could use sex to get our cutie marks."
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... This is ridiculous. It started out mid-serious, and it ended in a parody and-I don't even know what you're writing anymore. O_O Anyway, sorry to say that it doesn't come off as either funny or good clop. It's just a mess of things coming out of nowhere.
Meinos Kaen
This would be creepy if I could actually take it seriously.
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I need to work on other things, and be more serious when I write.
Aww, this was great! It's a shame it's cancelled.
Good god, you have to continue this! It's ludicrous and fun in all the right ways!
As one foalcon writer to another: you're doing a damn fine job
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Keep it up sir!
a bit shallow, but passable.
As your good friend IRL, i never gave up hope on your work. Also never gave up on this story since its always well made and got cancelled, Truly proud of you
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now they all know.
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but you're better at it.
Love it. Absolutely love it. My hat is off to you good sir.
I enjoyed this.
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Glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for the watch.
Hey Spike guess what? sloppy seconds?
I'm sorry little budddy. As much as I love the little green guy I have to make a joke at his expencie besides thats what guys do.
Besides I hear dragons have two you ask me I would have two normal size ones then one big one. With two you can full more holes. You should tell her that see what she does.
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Once you go dragon you never want go back.
"Her for her were quite obvious"
Not really, seeing how you left out the word, which I will assume is "Feelings."
Also, your Punch out joke did not slip by me. Well done.
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what?
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I'll fix that. Glad you got the reference.
Me gusta.
Little Mac!
Boo, wheres the good stuff
? But seriously still good
Nice punch out reference
, solid chapter.
Rather impressive, I shall be watching for more and go Sweetieloo! How about if Spike joins and get's bucked by Scootaloo or Sweetie Belle? A few spelling and grammererrors but nothing major...for some reason, even though it's wrong...I want to see Diamond 'speaking' to her father.