Sure, changeling invasions have become semi-common, as have parasprite swarms, but did Equestria really expect donuts to attack?
A gift for Pencil Melody
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Aaaaayyyyyyyyyy
8184706 Thanks for the help :)
8184707 Yup.
This story does not match the writing style of most of the 179 other stories on this account, editing or not. It was either almost completely rewritten by the editor, or the author has purposely been writing poorly all this time.
8184711 It's actually kinda both. All I mostly did was add commas.
Errrrmmm,,,
Wut?
8184726 Don't mind the random.
8184708 :)
8184728 But...
It's all random-osity...
8184711 I had help
8184726 Do you like it
8184711
I quite agree.
Is Evictus doing as advised?
8184742 With quite a bit of help through PMs, yep.
8184741
I'm still not sure what it is... But it is kinda amusing!
Hey, good job!
8184749 Thanks
8184751 Thanks
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Could still be better, though. Always room for improvement.
Holy flaming cruellers! This was hilarious! I died so many times! And this story resurrected me! I loved it! Thank you so much!
Is it bad that I get this reference? I don't even. . .
~Melly~
8184759 That's true
8184762 Your welcome
It's an eminem reference
8184762 Along with the commas, I thought that a couple memes would lighten things up a bit as well.
It appears that my deed here is done.
8184772
8184782
Lol. :P I don't even listen to Eminem. T_T. Y? Y u do dis 2 meh!?
~Melly~
8184791
8184791 I actually only recently found out that Eminem existed, if not due to my friends being memelords.
~Pokes head out of her box.~
~Slowly slides head back in the box and slinks away.~
8184841 You didn't like it?
IT'S GLAD! you did something right!
8184868 Thanks!
8184859 ~Fades out of the shadows behind you.~
No I enjoyed it. Just Celestia's way of dealing with this reminded me of something...
beer house.
8184872 I'm glad you enjoyed it
Damn it, where's Twilight Sprinkle when you need her!?
8184879 XD
...
Beautiful.
this was a good read! I Am still rewriting massage. i will probably finish around friday or saturday
What's this? Something that's actually decent from Evictus? Well, color me surprised
8184948 Thanks XD
8184968 That's fine
8184979 thanks
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I love you forever! But not really; I'm taken.
~Melly~
8184738 To be fair, I did advise for the full abuse of the Random Tag's capabilities when it comes to comedy.
8185187 Thanks!
*claps my hands* well done sir, you finally have written a good story. Please Continue like that in future, you get a like
8185441 Thanks
Oh boy, this sounds like it ought to be pretty good.
8185933 It is. TheMajorTechie did an excellent job
Oh. My. Fucking. God.
Evictus, great job, dude! This story was amazing, I don't have much criticism for this. Just a few minor capitalization edits, but other than that, incredible job by you and your editor! Favorited!
8186021 Thank you :)
Evictus, my dear, you've hit the popular stories column
Knew you could do it. Fantastic story, and congratulations.
Huh. It's on the popular stories list now.
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