a heart warming story/sad on our favorite flightless pegasus Scootaloo and how she became an orphan as told in the perspective of her.
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I'm a Christian brony born in 10/19/1996, profile pic done by sweetstrokesstudios.. I may write M rated stories I take commissions $10 for first chapter and $5 for additional chapters
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glad you liked it Lumica
Like dis if you cri everytim ðŸ˜
The emotions in this I feel are a bit rushed to get to the point. There could have been more emphasis on the overall impact of her losing her parents, rather than just skimming through it. As is, it's a good somber tale of a filly in distress, but if I was reviewing it, I couldn't pass it, just because I don't feel it hits enough marks. But, however what I did like was the connection with the characters and how easily Scootaloo was able to overcome her own fears and doubts to become a strong filly on her own, despite her own limits of not being able to fly.
5/10. Needs work, but not bad.
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Thanks, I might actually edit it or rewrite it altogether. Thanks for the feedback and I'm glad you liked it.