After an amazing discovery and the birth of a being that will change the world as they know it, will that being and those around him make their own decisions or follow the plans of their leaders... In the event of making a change to the world in such a way that you would never know the repercussions of such an act, would you still make such a thing occur.
Please leave any comments, I'v never written anything before but after a series of dreams I felt it would be an insult to myself not to attempt to write this story. I don't know what to put for characters or for the categories and the rating will turn teen eventually, as there will be many more additions to the story but at the moment this is what you get...
Chapters (3)
Wow, do I feel unloved... I see people fighting for first on other stories, I don't even get comments in the first place...
Excellent story so far! Great direction and written very well, made me cry at some moments. I can't wait to see where this story goes. I will be watching it.
983145 Thank You I Hope you realize how much this means to me, your the first person to take there time to leave a comment.
So tell your friends if you want to see more!
Well, it looks good...I don't know why this isn't generating more attention...
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I'm glad you read my story, I love all of the ones you'v done so far, so your comment means quite a bit to me thank you my fellow Brony...
The next chapter should be posted soon.
The idea is there, and is reasonably well executed, although there are grammar mistakes abound. For a first attempt, it isn't bad.
Again, grammar errors.
I feel this chapter was a lot weaker than your last one. There wasn't really any imagery, and you didn't set a theme or a place. It sort of just happens somewhere.
Again, spelling and grammar mistakes, but you did a better job showing the scenario and presenting your characters here.
Keep it up.